THE GRAPHIC NOVEL AND AUDIO BOOK SERIES

BY
WILLIAM DERRICK III

GOKUDO 893 is an international hip-hop crime thriller, with erotic touches. A six-volume series snatching the reader under the surface of the ancient subculture of Yakuza. Deep cover agent RYDELL, gambles with people’s lives, infiltrating Aryan Nation trust circles – on a pills and powder trafficking sting in Maryland. He’s married to a sinking ship of addictions named MARCY, a recently retired auteur adult filmmaker. They have a daughter named SHANDELLE, who is excelling in ice skating. The bonding Rydell forms with his underworld crew makes him a liability, threatening his marriage, and his daughter’s life. Fearing extraction from his case, Rydell leverages clever chess moves to stay in the game.

Simultaneously in Tokyo, a secret meeting of the Elders discusses the fate of the organization. The infamous Boss of the most violent region, KATODANZO, sends shockwaves by rejecting an elaborate divestment plan. The OG’s hear him say that he is not who he once was, but they are not buying this ‘Man of principal, crusader of women’ talk.

Katodanzo’s wife, AMI SHIMADA MIKIMOTO knows Assassins will soon be in their chimney, and contacts the spirit world for protection. The legendary architect of death, Katodanzo… is happily retired. He is now a grandfather with an estranged son and ailing health issues linked to killer’s karma. Katodanzo is determined to wash the minds of Yakuza youth, however, they are devout followers of Z-Gen hip-hop, specifically the racketeer rhymes of KENJI NODICE.

GOKUDO 893 is a burning page gangster series with strong women characters, oscillating between two worlds that should have never collided.

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Whether you prefer the convenience of Kindle, the versatility of Apple Books, the accessibility of Google Play, or any other preferred ebook platform, this book is readily accessible to suit your reading preferences.

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ABOUT THE AUTHOR

William Derrick III

Creative Director: ALCAZAR FC’s
Screenwriter | Film Director | Graphic Novelist

What was the one experience that turned you into a writer?”  

There is no one answer, only an analysis of the sum of parts. My private life has always been a collection of near death deep breath escapes.  I wasn’t alone the night driving in an ice storm on a highway from Canton. An 18-wheeler switched lanes abruptly. Forcing Alonzo, Roland, and me into a scrambling, squint-visibility skid out. Spun dizzy, we squirted out screaming into a sadistic slalom of shishkebab skewers. The three of us never talked about that night.

That’s not my answer. What shoved me off the diving board was the family business trip that my Father and I took to Ecuador. Our partner in the deal (retired Mossad) arranged a meeting with his guy in Guayaquil. A nefarious enigma in the coffee biz. This trip was full of surprises. The first was us falling out of the sky in a propeller malfunction above the mountains to Quito. The meeting took place after an earthquake, at a strip club. Our contact showed us his entire operation. Only a few Americans had been here. My Father and I were privileged to see the entire operation and taste the bursting succulent flavor of this brew. All coffees are not the same. I was seventeen when it all clicked. I vowed to return with the credentials to introduce the world to this Man’s mystic morning elixir. Doing business in South America is never dull. You can taste the love in the food, and feel the soul of the music. Danger was the scent of the wind. The dank drip of coffee’s dark side still bubbles in my flashbacks.

Peeling off scars along the path. So far, I’ve been in the bizarre, and fascinating Hollywood trenches for more than two decades. Similar to Tekken’s many slimy ladder levels, the malaise maze of sewers requires faith-based maneuvering to trust trap doors to daylight. Oh, the people you’ll meet running on this booby-trapped conveyor belt of mercenary trapeze artists. Real friendships in this business are priceless, and I am eternally grateful for my Voltron attachments.

When you intern with the Devil, you see corrupted minds, souls sold, and unexplainable disappearances. You won’t be the first person to sleep in a car, surfing sofas, negotiating shelter with toxic opportunists while weighing psychological compromises.

They say the collection of crippling pain breaks out the beast in your pieces. I hang’em high in a private gallery. My apartment was burglarized twice. Stripped raw. Thieves ripped the hangers right off the rack in the closet. Not a can of soup, or toilet paper was spared. It was an inside job. My art gallery continues to fill with humbling experiences.

My Hollywood Filmmaking Adventures

Growing up in Shaker Heights Ohio as Dianne and Bill’s son, I took an unusual route to a writing career. My two brothers Chris and Alex were budding photographers and movie buffs since elementary school. We worked together co-writing/directing experimental stuff in the backyard, recruiting our neighborhood friends.

My two cousins Mike and Andrew were state legend football Gods, it would have been cool to stand next to them in battle-scared gridiron armor, but those shoes didn’t fit. I chose the swift blade of Fencing. After winning my fair share of foil trophies at local and regional events, I went on to be smashed in the middle rounds of the Junior Olympics.

Committing to Ohio University, I set up my curriculum for international business. There was no Fencing program. Writing was what I did in my free time. Letters to family, letters to friends, and pen pals all over the world. Collecting handwritten adventures.

A rather unique family-duty called, transferring me to West Virginia University for what was almost exactly the same story of Excalibur. The scrawny one pulled the sword out. I’m talking about the honor of following my Grandfather Horace, and Uncle Tracy into the fold of OMEGA PSI PHI. As a third-generation legacy, my journey pledging the illustrious fraternity required three tours. I returned to Ohio University to complete my degree with over ten years of scribbled escapades bursting from my backpack. I wasn’t shy, but at the time you couldn’t pay me to stand in front of a large group and deliver these stories. I drifted through life fervently… an observant man of few words.

We all have crazy roommate stories. Mine took place sophomore year. He invited me to hang out often, and took it personally (more than a few times) when I chose to stay home and work on my computer. My Roommate was a street dude with the kind of bashed knuckles you didn’t argue with. He called me out when his girlfriend’s boudoir photos came up missing. Instead of asking me to help search, he set fire to my backpack before looking under his bed. This cold rubber glove of emptiness felt like black market scavengers snatching out my spleen. I wasn’t the same.  One thing was for sure, I’d never write again.  I laugh because we can run from our purpose as long and far as we want, but the purpose will be there waiting everywhere we go. Haunting our sleep like fish hooks pulling our eyes open to own it.

PROFESSIONAL CAREER:


WRITER/DIRECTOR/PRODUCER

ARCHITECTS OF CRIME – Hollywood Film Festival 2017
ARCHITECTS OF CRIME – Official selection – Academy Award qualifying LA Shorts Film Festival 2016
ARCHITECTS OF CRIME – Action on Film International Film Festival 2016
FU*PAYME! Winner – Hollywood Black Film Festival 2010
FU*PAYME! Winner – Amsterdam in the Picture 2008
FU*PAYME! Official selection – Texas Black Film Festival 2008
FU*PAYME! Official selection – Seattle Science Fiction Short Film Festival 2008
FU*PAYME! Audience Award – Arizona Film Festival 2007
SPLIT ENDS (Television Pilot) 20th Century Fox Alternative 2007
NOW YA KNOW! Official Selection: New Orleans Media Experience 2004
THE CHOP SHOP – Atom Films showcase, Sundance Film Festival 2000

SCREENWRITER
Member of WGA West

GOKUDO 893 Graphic Novel + series pilot adaptation
THE KNIFE CATCHER
GYPSY GOOD TIME
PEANUT BUTTER FLOORS
CRIMINOLOGY
BLOOM – Winner: Toronto Film Festival 2020
BLOOM – Official Selection: Bronze Lens Film Festival 2020
BLOOM – Official Selection: The Magnolia Film Festival 2020
BLOOM – Official Selection: Oregon Short Film Festival 2020
BLOOM – Official Selection: Lakeshorts Film Festival 2020
DRUMLINE 2 – Wendy Finerman, Producer (20th Century Fox)
HOTWIRE
HEAVY LIQUID
THIS NEVER HAPPENED
FIRE ESCAPES
THE BURNING SANDS
THE SECRET TO PERSIAN GIRLS
STAINED GLASS
MEASURED FOR THE DROP
WINNER TAKES NOTHING
ROMAN CANDLES
CAR WARS
SPLIT ENDS – reality pilot FOX Alternative
CHOCOLATE TURTLES
THE GREAT PRETENDER

HEAVY LIQUID

The dark side of coffee

Junior year, I had no idea what my summer job was going to be. Writing on the wall signaled that my Dad was planning another one of his family vacation/business trips. I thought we were Grizwalding to Chicago in the Ford Taurus wagon. Turns out, the topic was coffee, and the destination was Ecuador. 

Every time my Dad returned from overseas, he brought artifacts, scars, and scathing visuals in the form of stories. 

I had to make some pretty big promises to talk my way into being his sidekick. 

My intro to the coffee-importer business began as an intern. The makings of our first real adult-bonding experience. My Dad sent me riding my bike to the library where I researched poisonous frogs;  factors of climate, customs, slang, do’s and don’ts, phrases, conversation starters, which traditional foods pair with local coctails, and what to look for when touching, smelling, and tasting beans. Hey, gas is real! I was running errands, obtaining permits, proofing paperwork, permits, and trying to poke holes in his pitch that he practiced relentlessly. 

That Summer launched our collection of unforgettable South American missions. It was hard to sleep knowing Ecuador had flying insects that carried incurable diseases.

Crushing obstacles kept coming from our guys in Ecuador. Issues with weather. Issues with competitors. The scents in the clouds of revolutionary war. The trip was called off a dozen times. 

I learned a lot watching him cold-call his way through the endless mazes of red tape in both United States and Ecuadorian Government bureaucracies. As an independent agent, he finally shoe horned himself into a meeting with a major player in the game.  This was the unfolding of a naive and sheltered teen stepping into a nefarious world of treachery and deceit, decorated by colorful big hat characters, and I was all for it. 

The story you’re about to nibble on is one of the ones we barely survived. Affectionately known as: PROPELLORS OVER ECUADOR.

40,000 feet up.

Lost in thought is peace.

Sipping on a cold lime Jarito soda.

Reclined in the rear of six rows of comfortable blue corduroy bucket seats.

The sky was clear of any color of clouds. I was thumbing past pages in a tourist magazine with African safari pics. Noticing the teeth and grooves in the rippling reflexes of fat tongue jungle cats taking big swigs at the edge of the river, recoiling from lunging alligators… when: 

TAT!TAT!TAT!TAT! Our right propeller started coughing smoke!? 

At the same time, something metal was clampering out of place gnawing the gears. What was happening? All action came to a whiplash air-brakes halt. Twenty-four passengers cringing with eyes, their burning eyes searched for the source of that hideous sound. Every single one of us lost our shit when we heard it. Something in that outside compartment popped like a pack of firecrackers. Nobody moved. Where could we go? What could we do?

Then it stopped… 

Strangled by the eerie silence, many shrieked as we flinched at the nightmare knuckles of air buffeting the windows. The left engine was swine-squealing. The vessel jolted. Thick, ugly grey pungent smoke infiltrated our cramped cabin. My magazine hit the floor. Our Stewardess was walking sideways balancing a tray of jiggly refreshments – keeping a straight face amidst the choking of greusome gears choppin’ like a wood-chipper.

I should have listened to my intuition and got off the plane when that lady boarded with a chicken under her arm. All I did was ask my Dad if we were on the right flight. He found my tone funny, and loud whispered:  “That chicken isn’t your business.”

Wasn’t shit funny now. Too afraid to peek out the window. The horrible site of each of their unique scared faces reverberated in my head. I couldn’t keep my eyes shut. Turbulence slammed the right side like a flock of Hitchcock birds. Twisting stomachs turned inside out as we dipped forward like a seesaw. Drinks flew past. Hitting me in the face.

WE WERE SCREAMING!

The wobbly thrust of the harsh straightening smashed our Stewardess against the roof of the cabin. The voice in my head let off a helpless whimper, surrendering to another nausiating weight shift. A chorus of Spanish prayers begged mercy for our lives. Then we started spinning. Sinking shit in a toilet’s whirlpool. I was dizzy from the upside down fall. Suffocating on chugged air like a shark snatching a swimmer’s ankle between breaths. Wretching at the sounds. 

Soon everyone smelled the vomit. The piss. The farts.

Wings waddling high above the middle of two mountain peaks. Gravity had us horribly. That Chicken flew into my face, flapping so hard its beak slashed a scar under my chin. I pushed it aside, covered by moist floating feathers. The Captains door was open. His hat was off. He had a fresh fade. His short sleeved shirt was blue with soaked armpits. Working the angles. Wrestling levers, jabbing buttons. Twisting gyroscope pressure locks. Thorough with a forehead furrow frowned in the fight for a shared tomorrow.

The daze I was in was a trance way beyond disillusioned acceptance of fantasy’s escape from reality. I imagined myself opening the window, climbing out on that wing with a kit of tools, opening the smokey hatch, and knowing exactly what to do to fix the conked circuitry.

The cold hands of death pinching ears slapped me out of my trance. The plane dipped hard to the right. The second round of turbulence arrived hitting heavier like a hail storm of hammers! We shivered as if skidding on bumpy ice too close to a cliff in a blizzard. We knew we were going to burst into flames or crash into one of those mountains, this could get no worse. I hoped somebody kind would want to read my eulogy. This was a departure from Earth. The madness carried pockets of silence. Stink. I was clutching a Mexican coin in the palm of my hand. Praying.

Then, it happened: BOOM!BOOM!BAPPADAF!KABOOM! More turbulence pummeled the cockpit like a bag of rocks dumped from an overpass. The deafening lumps yanked us out of our altitude. This submissive loss of aviator’s grip and cheek-smushing G-force could not be copied by amusement park engineers. I turned to my Dad, eyes pleading “What to do?” He plucked his wrinkled, white monogrammed WADjr handkerchief out of his jacket’s carnation pocket. Dabbing his face, and mopping his brow, my Dad said: “Be still, try to be still.”  

Thanks for nothing. The avalanche of denting meteors morphing into a mirage of frozen sound. The walls sparkled as if glistered by pomade. Every single one of the twelve passengers sat drenched in stench, betrayed by the bleak absence of grinding propeller parts.  

Every few seconds, the Captain slowed the speed of our vertical, but it was not enough.

This was our last trip.

If this thing didn’t explode, we were going to be eaten by the fish, or whatever hungry beast hunts on the slippery side of those mountains. Everybody could see that we were going to run out of sky soon. Nobody moved. 

We fell for what felt like a month.

I looked over at my Dad, wondering how he was not scared. The veins on the top of his hand squiggled like earthworms, his breathing was short and soft. The way he throttled fear was like some spooky war vet, more shrapnel than man. His eyes sat in his face calmly, scaring me into more potent prayers of promises. 

The sky was so bright, that only polarized lens squinters could discern details from the shrinking window. That’s when something snatched my attention, allowing me to clock an architecture so impossible. 

A coruscating and majestic city in the clouds. Made out of clouds. Was this really what I was seeing? Rendered feeble from hyperventilating, a hot flush of stinging shock-flashes interrupted my mumbling. I tried jamming my eyes shut again, but the city in the clouds forbade escape. My prayer was a promise to always honor every invitation. I had no idea what that meant at the time. As soon as I heard myself say it, something cracked, and the plane was free from the grip of Devil’s teeth. The descent suddenly slowed, both propellers resumed into coughs of resuscitation. 

The tight-torso passengers sat still, soaked. Steady adrenaline in the rancid whiff of burnt resistor coils. Skeptic for this apparent rescue’s realness. Eventually, I found comfort when I heard twelve groans letting off in a staggering ooze of unwinding muscles. 

The remaining minutes were something short of soothing. Smoothing suspicions. 

We hugged one another like family. 

We landed. 

Bumping. Tipsy in a wispy tall grass emergency airfield, adjacent to the airport. Twelve of us exited that cabin that afternoon. Jello-legged down those steps into mosquito’s humidity. Huddling. Cuddling. Smothering. Crying. Pouring biblical blessings into our shared survivor’s circle. Kissing each other. Some kissed the ground, others stood saluting grateful salutations, grabbing handfuls of dirt, sending smiles to the sun.

The taxi ride to our hotel was a quick, air-conditioned slalom descent into the pothole-infested streets of downtown Guayaquil. Forced to digest sobering images in a legacy of comfortless poverty.

GUAYAQUIL, ECUADOR

The stupidity of this humidity was the epitome of how to get rid of me. 

The hotel Receptionist casually cautioned us against strolls after dark, handing us our room keys. Respect. We soon found ourselves overwhelmed sniffing the bullhide sofas, teak, and bamboo decor through the cool dark lobby, en route to our suite. The lobby elevator doors opened and six giggling, tanned women with silk-sheened wavy hair in colorful thong bikinis filed out. Bursting in cuerpa-confidence. Sauntering past scented in exotic oils; these taut tummy, belly-bead dancers had fluttery butterfly lashes – fast talking in a liquid vernacular my ears didn’t dare decipher. I was seventeen, and unable to disguise salacious gazes. My up-and-down appraisal was pitifully unpolished and conspicuous. With a snap of the hair, and not-so-subtle sunglasses tilting, defiant snickers recaptured the appraisal power from me. Sandals pounding off down the cold tiles in full cat-walker’s stride. Wow.

Our 7th-floor suite was surprisingly large with two queen size beds, a wet bar, and walk-in closets. The sliding glass wall patio balcony door had the whisper roller slide of a luxury resort, featuring an intrusive view of an elementary school across the street beyond the hotel pool deck. 

An earthquake must have crippled the town recently, a building that stood between the hotel and the elementary school appeared to have been reduced to fresh rubble. The entire facade of the South side of the school was missing. Little, stiff-shoulder uniformed students raising their hands, in nine classrooms on three floors. The edges of the crumbling structure weren’t even marked off with yellow construction tape. 

The Ninos knew the ledge.

My Father mentioned a few things about our Host on the way here. First, that he was known for his outlandish attire, cigars, sexist jokes, and played an impeccable game of punctuality. A contest. We had less than an hour. Dad wanted to beat him and slipped out of his traveling shoes, plucking his dinner loafers from his suitcase. A pair of camel-colored suede espadrilles.  He hung his tan suit, and crisp white shirt on the back of the bathroom door hook for proper steaming. Twisting the squeaky shower nozzle, he reminded me not to wear any of that hip-hop stuff.

The bathroom door shut, and I dumped my bags onto the bed. Figuring a presentable assembly. I brought three fits. All I had to do was not look too interesting to the streets. My Mom told me a hundred times that whatever I do and say, will reflect on him, and that every deal was the most important one. Also, every weakness displayed is free ammo. Teenagers aren’t always good at listening. I picked out some navy blue slacks, a burgundy short-sleeved button down guayabera joint with some matching burgundy espadrilles, and drift to the balcony.  

The clouds were lumpy cotton logs. Clouds were going to always be my thing after today. I stood there examining crab-speed shifting shapes. The late afternoon breeze felt good against my face. My nostrils started flexing from the scent of sizzling onions, peppers, and sausages from street vendors in every direction for miles. Those kids across the way were so well-mannered. Not a class clown amongst them. I studied every room on every floor. A bizarre empathy washed me with gratitude for the opportunities waiting at home. 

A poolside deejay was playing downtempo loungy stuff in Spanish that I loved. My distracted eyelids fell away, landing upon six topless sunbathers below at the pool. Five face down, one up. 

The ladies from the lobby!  

I wasn’t too ashamed to say that this was the first time Id ever seen a naked woman, in person. Needless to say, I didn’t blink. Checking my watch. Did I have time to grab my shorts, and go down to the cabana bar to act like I was there for a swim? Maybe I could pull off being cool enough to stroll on over with an interesting-looking book to the spare chair. Accidentally noticing, and casually asking them for help with a Spanish phrase translation. Making them laugh at how badly I butchered it. Striking up a broken ice, parched conversation. Winking to the bar for seven slushy margaritas to be slid over. These images flashed through the theatre of my mind when it happened:

The ugliest sound a human can make is when it witnesses carnage. A decibel of screams so shattering, my swimming fantasy trance abruptly corrupted. I turned to my right, adjusting my sight seven stories to the street below – where people were hurrying out of the way. My imagination strangely anticipated seeing a snorting bull charging someone in the middle of the street.  My sifting eyes sliced through the crowd. Hunting… until… there! Not a bull, or a sequined Matador. Instead, some lanky guy in a torn red t-shirt, and dingy white jeans shot out – scrambling frantic – clawing his way around the corner. 

Eyes wide and watery like a scared horse, whoever the runner was, he was being chased by four guys in a sputtery engine, primer-grey pickup truck. The kind with gas canisters fastened on the back hips of the wheel wells.

The crowd on the corner dove for cover, but not in time. The rambling runner trampled a few sausage buggy customers before BOOM! The truck took out the entire sausage buggy – skidding up on the curb. Buns bouncing everywhere. Dirty dogs pouncing on the half-cooked meat. 

The pickup truck’s doors popped open, and four plaid shirt Muchachos jumped out sporting Stetsons and gold-toe cowboy boots. Chasing the guy down, stomping him unconscious with those heavy block heels. Blood shot up squirting like a supersoaker. I tried to turn away. I thought it was over, but that’s when the onlooker’s screams turned to terror. This guy they were kicking must have done something unthinkable, because what happened next made me grab the balcony ledge. 

The mudhole stompers ran back and got tires from the back of the truck. My world traveler knowledge needed more passport stamps to clue in to why they were stuffing this guy into the tires. Books clapped shut. Windows clunked into the lock position. Blinds dropped. The third-floor Teachers ushered the students out of the room, fire-drill style. 

The deejay’s poolside dance beats diluted all of this from the bikini sunbathers. 

I thought the angry outlaws were going to leave him trapped in those tires. Maybe roll him down the street or something. One of them pulled that gas canister from the side of the truck. Unscrewing the top. Splashing petrol on the tires. Reviving the man. Screams from the gaggle of onlookers started to haunt me for selfishly staying too long. Watching…

The truck driver flicked a zippo… 

That’s when a heavy hand hooked my shoulder. My Dad snatched me back into the room. His twisted face said: “What did I tell you about minding your damned business!!!?” Meet me downstairs. I told you this guy is always early.”

SMOKE IS SERVED

Short minutes later, I steped out of the elevator in time to see Dad in the lobby shaking hands with our most generous Host. A tall, well-fed, boisterous type with an affinity for fine wine, custom-made shirts, and as expected, a remarkably unlimited supply of distasteful puns.  

The three of us bonded over the succulent local cuisine. I had the Locro de Papa (Potato and cheese soup).  Dad made funny affirmative faces while munching on the Cuy (Guinea pig). Our Host didn’t even open the menu, he told our server to bring the Chugchucaras. This dish roughly translates to chest-feet-skin’ in the indigenous Quechuan dialect. Chugchucaras was made with deep-fried pig parts, accompanied by a platter of boiled hominy, pequino potatoes, toasted corn, plantain, and a poquito cheese-filled empanada. Good lord! I don’t eat swine, but I did today. 

Dad told me not to mention today’s two speed-bumps during dinner. Dad always played his poker face. With dinner on the fire, it was time for cocktails. Our most gracious Host certainly got his drink on. You could tell he was a lot of fun by the way he clapped his big, gnarled hands, rubbing them together like summoning a genie.  He caught the eye of our server, requesting a pitcher of a local cocktail called Canelazo. A warm punchy sipping sauce, spiced with sugar cane alcohol. 

A toast. 

Drinking is business, and so it began. 

Dad started pitching concepts. Nothing he says is simple, you have to listen carefully to the twenty-minute psychology set-up. You can’t even chew too loud. Our Host ordered another pitcher of Canelazo. The only time he interrupted was when he gestured to the cigar merchant with the squeaky wooden wheel barrel. He pointed to me, so he could keep listening to my Dad, requesting that I select three. He could tell by my bashful grin, that I was no aficionado of smoke or vino. His fatherly smile took pride in schooling me. After requesting permission to pause, he turned and shot a glance at the Cigar Merchant. His eyebrows scrunched, clearly saying “These are my American friends, your best, please”. Cigar Merchant opened a secret shelf underneath the main display, pulling out three special situations.  

The name on the wrapper was ‘Hoyo De Monterrey La Amistad Black’. I thought that was a pretty badass name, and couldn’t wait to ask him to tell us all about slave ship history. Before I could sniff mine, a flame was in my face, and there it was, the delicious flavor of coffee and black pepper whiffiling in the smoke signal scent. Afternotes of black cherries and chocolate turned me into a student of smoke from that night forward. 

My Dad was in his zone, so he declined his. Nobody saw me tuck his in my pocket. To make a long story short. That is something my Dad doesn’t do. Business has to be explained after reading the room. His eyes are like that of a cobra when he locks on you. He gets deep with perspectives on theories that pull you in. I’ve seen him do it with magician’s hypnotic analogies, self-deprecating humor, quotes from history’s greatest leaders, or survivor stories from our previous adventures. 

I was just a kid from Cleveland, sitting here in this fancy third-world Casablanca, sipping Canelazo, head-rushed from scented smoke, watching my Dad gain this guy’s trust. Hoping that one day I could intrigue an investor in such polished fashion. 

Our Host sat back, legs crossed in warped attention, savoring his fourth Canelazo. Shapes in the smoke spilling out of his big jaw in slow-mo. Carefully following every word. So much so, that we were invited to finish the second half of the pitch at his home. When? Now!? He had a limo outside and wasn’t joking when he said his helicopter was in the shop. He told me it was bad luck to leave a drink unfinished at a business meeting, so I gulped the remainder of my Canelazo. The limo driver asked if it was true that in America, you can get money from the Government to pay your bills and not have a job. 

The next thing I knew, we were pulling up to beachfront fortress gates with armed guards. This was no hotel. This was his home. 

We were introduced to the operation. Three big gun bandoleer body guards greeted us outside with torches, he took us to the plantation. The entire bean genesis. A process beginning at the seedling stage. Ripening into maturity, battling nature’s competition to get picked, washed, packed, weighed, and delivered to the trucks to the boats designated for international ports for repackaging, distribution, and finally into your cup. 

Some of the workers lived on-site in tiny apartments. I fancied myself a man of the people, and said hello to them. Some smiled, nodding affection, others looked spooked. There was a barn that I tried to wander off into. 

I had questions, but my Dad had a litany of trademark invisible gestures. Secret signals that only I knew. The gentle brushing of one’s nose meant “Not now”.  What was up with that barn?  He knew I peeped it. Another gesture said to keep it a secret. Nothing else needed to be said. So, we went back inside and finished the pitch in a movie theatre. Our host listened to the entire pitch until finally standing to shake hands with us. 

It was on… Break broken.

Consumers have no idea what each bean must escape to make it to their cup.

I returned home to America to finish college, studying International Relations, and Film Theory at Ohio University. The day I graduated, I found myself in a hurry to get out to Los Angeles to enter the film business. The mind-bending baptism experience of Ecuador’s coffee business was what I knew, and I couldn’t wait to write that script.

Messing with the wrong people caused me to graduate from Ohio University on crutches. My Uncle Tracy gifted me a first-real-job internship with the Detroit Pistons. Wanting to impress him, I was fast to graduate from crutches to cane, and made a few rookie mistakes, blissfully unaware of the opportunity’s real-world value. I blew it and wasted a decade drowning in regret.

USC FILM SCHOOL

The University of Southern California had a summer intensive filmmaker program that was supposedly tricky to get into. This school sits behind gates and armed guards similar to the ones I left in Ecuador. LA seemed like a completely different planet than Cleveland. I looked forward to assimilating.  

 The summer intensive filmmaker workshop.  The student body was made up of visionaries from England, Italy, Korea, India, Canada, and Russia. For aspiring cinephiles, the lectures, and exposure to the vast USC network of resources were priceless. I was told at the time, that no writer/director had ever won best in class for the short film class and the music video class… I won the ‘Best in class’ award for a subliminal metaphor toxc love mash-up featuring songs by Ice Cube, and Gangstarr.  This was the signal. I decided to stay on the West Coast, and go pro.

My mentors suggested developing stories from personal experiences, things that I know better than anybody in the world. My vault started with TV pilots about the secret world of fencing, fraternities, and the dark side of Coffee importing. 

FILM #1
The rookie debut
“MEASURED FOR THE DROP”

The first film out of USC had to set a precedence of how hard I could come as a writer. One of my favorite genres was the tragic life of the pulpy noir gumshoe. Some of my favorites are: “Double Indemnity, Chinatown, The Killers, The Maltese Falcon, and Double Dial M for Murder.” I worked out at this gym in the Valley and met this over-competitive guy by the dip machine. He bet people money that he could do more. He was funny, but he had this cool gravelly voice with an off-beat cadence. It reminded me of the Detective-speak from the movies I was into. If you ask one hundred people in LA if they’ve ever acted before, you will get one hundred affirmatives. I asked him to be the lead in the film. Now, I had to get a location.

The challenge was making a film with zero budget that could pop hard enough to deserve a meeting at the studios. Truth be told, I was too green to be trying to compete with the classics. I was on my knees praying several times a day, so I wasn’t shocked at all when doors began opening. The budgetary requirements of this film started growing, I tried to charm my way into getting free services, but failed. LA is a big money city where everybody has to get paid.

During the filming, my apartment was cleaned out. Robbed! Gutted! Everything was taken. I mean everything. Frozen pizzas! The Henny. Books. Underwear from the hamper. Hangers in the closets. My vinyl collection. College photos. Cameras. Computers. I know who did it. He’s probably reading this bio. Karma is real.

This was before internet delivery, so I went to the mall in my pajamas.

I prayed for weeks until one day, the stars crashed into alignment. Constance Zimmer (Entourage) was suddenly interested in the project. That was so cool! This was going to happen! Constance was a joy to work with. She blessed the set with amazing energy that made everyone else soar. The film came out well, got into a few festivals, and was used as currency to get a few meetings in town. One thing you can’t do in LA is walk around saying you’re a filmmaker with no film to show. I had a decent one. However, nobody bit, meaning nobody was moved enough to see this as a feature film. I watched the short film over and over again looking for what I could have done better. The only thing more and more visible was the holes in the script, and glaring Directorial errors. This was part of the process. The first of many expensive lessons. On to the next!

“STAINED GLASS”

The second project was inspired by overhearing a conversation at a swanky Chinese restaurant in Reseda. One that I shouldn’t have. I was too afraid to turn around to see what sounded to me at the time, like the planning of a hit. One of those “Make it look like an accident” whisper conversations. I could have easily misunderstood what was really going on, but my imagination took hold and ran with it.

That night, I sat up wondering what would happen if what I heard was what was really going on. I asked myself, what if the hit took place as planned and the Boss’s Bodyguard got hit, survived, and saw who set it all up? I penned a short film script and woke my roommates up to read it. Something I think they really disliked about me.

My girlfriend’s father was a well known actor from a foreign country. I mean, I knew, but I never had a reason to really look at him like I could hire him for anything. A good-looking guy, he always had this powerful villain’s voice, and an even bigger presence when he entered any room. I asked him to be in it and was humbled by his loving generosity.

Back to the same Chinese restaurant in Reseda. This place had the kind of décor that you could just sit and stare at for hours. I always thanked the Manager for the scenery when I left. He probably thought I meant the servers. He sent over drinks from time to time because of how well I tipped his team. I waited until the perfect moment and made him an offer, asking to shoot there, after hours. He thought the film concept was terrible, but caved in when I paid him.

We got the guns. The crew, the food, costumes, and permits.

The pre-production phase was crazy and almost killed the film in two ways. The Investor was some stoner I met at a party, introduced by a guy I knew from college. He sized me up pretty well, and when he knew I was a writer, and wanna-be director in search of funding, Stoner said “God works in mysterious ways”.  A few days later, Stoner surprised me by sending a shoe box in the regular mail containing thirty six thousand dollars. The dollars were dotted in blood. I didn’t know what to say, and couldn’t keep this money in the house, so I bought a safe deposit box at my bank. Stoner called a few weeks into the process saying that he wanted to play the lead role. I was so upset with Stoner. I was so serious about my mission and doing things right, I told him he could have his money back. He backed down and said that he wanted to be taken seriously. I suggested that he move to LA, enroll in acting school and get his weight up. Then, we can reconnect when he was in his zone. He moved in to the apartment next to mine a week later. He was a cool dude, but we bumped heads when his other friends told him that I was using him. They got in his ear and somehow convinced him that I stole his money. He tried his hardest to turn every single person in town against me for years. The only defense I had was that he smoked so much weed, that NOBODY took someone seriously who was always high.

The second was because the location manager was a snake. This guy tried to get ten thousand dollars out of the budget for a loaded hospital set. Hey, I’m no hater, he deserved whatever he says his hard work was worth. However, that was too much. I offered him three thousand cash. He told me to get out of his face with that BS, and hung up on me. The hospital was brand new, not a set, but a real hospital that wasn’t occupied yet. Some Production Designers can certainly pull off breathtaking magic, but for this budget, nobody I had access to could pull off turning my apartment into a hospital. To come this far and feel it collapsing filled my stomach with bursting knots of anxiety. I wished that I hadn’t seen this beautiful place, then I wouldn’t have fallen in love with it. I called the Hospital contact to thank her, and to ask for a referral to a clinic, or something. She invited me to lunch where I found out that she had given the location to the Location Scout for free. “You dirty rat!” I chalked it up to the political mechanics of the game, the show must go on.

Filming went smoothly. Our gun wrangler shot up the entire parking lot of that Valley restaurant. The Police never came. The final sequence takes place after the shoot-out, when the Bodyguard wakes wounded in the hospital. Bandaged, and blinded by a bullet’s flashburn. Sensing the Assailants are near, the Bodyguard’s survival depends on choosing the right Nurse to confide in.

My team had something for that Location Scout. We told him that he’d get paid after the shoot. He sat there all weekend. Waiting. Watching our work. Asking too many questions. I was in the film, as an extra with one line for the martini shot. The crew started packing up and loading the trucks. That’s when the Location Scout kicked the door open in the middle of the take, demanding his money. Shouting expletives, trying to ruin the last shot. The Location Manager knew he’d do that, and had three Security Guards rush in to remove him.

The next day we dropped the film off at a processing lab, after hours. The Receptionist told me on the phone where to leave it in the basement receiving area. I experienced a God Moment when I dropped it off, filled out the log, and left. As soon as I got outside, something hit me. A strange whiff or something that told me… to go back down there and make sure my name and phone number were written clearly. When I did, I saw a name badge on the chair at the desk. The person who works there left it out. Why was it the name of the Location Scout!? YES! He worked there!? I laughed out loud, and took the film to another lab for processing. That was a close one. The film went on to win a few local festivals and screened at Doughboy’s Dozens. Rest in Peace, Dough Boy.

THE CHOP SHOP

That Mezcal almost cost me my life.

Window-shopping. Lunchtime. Late summer. Deep in the San Fernando Valley, at the Topanga Mall. Walking on pillows. My black and pink Fila flip-flops were fulla squeaky foam. I decided not to buy anything and was about to get up outta there when I saw Ice Cube at a jewelry store. He’s not the kind of person you think you see. It was him. Black T-shirt. Black jeans. Black Chucks. Black baseball hat. He was with two other guys, leaning over the glass counter. He stood up when he caught me staring at him. Taller than I assumed, the Brother has a serious scowl. A lion’s snare bending the edges of his frown. Calmness in his posture let on that he was used to people noticing him, and even better at not getting caught slipping. I walked past. Had I been in the proper mind state, I might have said something to him. Props. Respect for a line in a song I admired. Instead, I hit him with a head nod, he hit me back with a slower one.  I kept it moving. 

Down the steps I went, on my way to the exits when I saw her. A young lady strolling toward the food court. Im into walks. Every woman has a dance, a flowing, hair-bouncing rhythm. Women are music and music is love. Songs have been written about the way women move.

She was short, caramel colored with sandy brown, crimpy curls, and azure blue contacts. She didnt see me studying her in line at the smoothie place. The way she stood. Shoulders-back, sorta poised like a ballerina threatening to raise up tumbling away on her toes. 

I moofed up behind her in my pillowy flip flops, with a look on my face that would have made my boys laugh, you know that look. That about to tell a joke, half grin, mouth open before you speak” thing.  She wore black tights, showcasing a muscled sprinters physique. I ordered the protein and greens mean machine thing. She sat down at a table to wait. I walked over and asked if I could talk to her. Her name was Linda. She accepted with a giggling Spanish accent. There was no breeze in the mall, only elevator instrumentals. Lindas wispy bronze ringlets were bursting out of black roots. Her well-practiced eyes sizing me up with a glance. She knew I was just wasting time because I didnt have any bags. Having hit the fragrance demos in the mens section, I was smelling good in torn-up jeans, an Indians hat twisted back, a white t-shirt and those floofy Fila flips. My outfit could have been a lot cooler, but she was already talking to me, so, I wasnt thinking about it. 

I asked her what school she ran for. Her eyes darted around when she said she was half-ass considering taking a few classes at Peirce Community College. 

Our smoothies slid down the counter wild West saloon style. I asked her if I could walk her wherever she was going. Linda smiled. The convo kept going. She was on lunch break, an assistant at a Real Estate office around the corner on Topanga. We spent the next twenty minutes cruising the womens apparel sections, talking, laughing at my off-beat brand of self-deprecating fish-out-of-Ohio jokes.

The kind of eye contact Linda was giving me when I spoke told me shed say yes if I asked her out. She could talk about anything. You know if a person wants to ditch you, theyll say something stupid like, “I need to go get food at the pet store for my hammerhead shark” – and b-line to the exit.

Linda kept talking. I knew she had to get back soon, so I went for the kill Lets exchange numbers and hang out this weekend, how about dinner? I know the perfect place.” She laughed because Id been in LA less than a week.

I could have just set the date/time/location of some restaurant from the LA Weekly magazine, right there. However, I wanted to soak up her vibe. You know? See how she reacted to randoms on the phone. I wanted to talk a little shit, trigger her slang lexicon, see if I knew the writers of the books she read, and most importantly, I wanted to peep her playlist. I prayed to God that she didnt pronounce the L’ in salmon. 

I called the next day, and her phone went directly first ring to V.M. I left a little late-night Deejay voice – cool to meet you” message to make sure she didnt forget about me, and hung up. Every guy knows women lose interest in you immediately unless you make them think youre not interested. I HATED the rules of attraction’s head games, damn it, so I risked it all, calling again the next day. Three days went by and no call back. Damn-it! I must have come off as creepy. Oh well. 

Yeah, but I couldnt stop thinking about her. 

I gave it two more days before placing another call. Now her V.M. is full.

Overthinking myself to the edge of the anxiety high dive. I got mad, telling myself that I wasn’t going to answer if she called. My dry-ass LA number did not ring for the rest of the week.

Rewinding our convo, and analyzing the details, I thought things went well. Whatever. She wasnt shit anyway. Keeping her boss waiting like that. Id fire her ass in a minute. Oh well, I was pretty good at laughing off rejection, so I was already looking in the LA Weekly for a new club to try out this weekend. 

 Exploring my new city, I decided to grab lunch at the famous ‘In And Out Burger’.  Im driving down Ventura Blvd when I find it. In case you’ve never been, all Im going to say about this place is that there’s a reason Los Angelinos love it. It could become your next addiction. I ordered the double-double, large fries, and a pink lemonade. 

They have a secret menu full of customizable combinations. 

Cruising. One-hand steering. The other is eating. I was soon in a place called Encino. Passing the cool boutiques crowding both sides of the boulevard, I clocked a basement fitness center, pulled in, and took the tour. This was so new to me. I finally found out what they meant when they said LA is the land of beautiful people. Every woman had veneers, perfect bodies, salon hairstyles, and sexy designer outfits. The dudes had chiseled jaws, botox eyes, and airbrush tans like statues from the wax museum when they passed heavily perfumed. The tour took me to the weightlifting section. The posh members were not pushing themselves to ugly-face limits of chaos, house of torture body destruction. The Armenian aerobic  instructor was in the mirrored room practicing her routine. 

There I was, in my ratty sweats starting my LA lifestyle. The working out in the middle of the day program. My eyes landed on a woman stretching in the pre-workout area. She was young 20s and took fitness very seriously. A short, ginger, Cubanita. I sat down a few feet away. Without much of an intro, I hit her up with the small talk, “Hey, how’s it going?”  –  her reflexes were good. She stiff-arm, Heisman jumped over that shit with a firm: What do you do?” I stuttered out the word ‘filmmaker’. She asked if there were any films that shed seen. 

I laughed bashfully, saying that I was writing my first script and planned on shopping it soon to my mentors in the USC grad network. Now was not the time to explain the difference between the summer intensive program, and the MFA. To me, just being at USC was my biggest life accomplishment, to date. I smiled those words out with booming confidence. She returned a smile so weak, her mouth hardly twitched when she said:

“Let me know when you get your movie deal.” She knew I was interested. Her words backhand slapped my amateur, wanna-be LA playboy persona – so bad, across the lips. Feeling the sting, knowing my pitiful raft at a yacht club was punctured, spinning-spittery, and sinking.  I threw out a foundationless Hail Mary. Asking her if she wanted to chill sometime. Maybe get coffee? She exhaled hard when she stood up. Her eyes were already more interested in seeing which treadmill was open than letting me waste more of her afternoon. The petite Cubanita bopped off harmonizing whatever song the Armenian dancer was cueing up in the room full of mirrors.  

Damn.

Whew! Shot out of the sky like a clay pigeon. Funny.

It happens.

Oh, well.

To tell the truth, I felt that the rotisserie roast was a tad rude for no reason. Maybe she was jaded by the guys in LA? I guess I wasn’t the first to say he was a filmmaker. I should have done my homework before opening my fat mouth.  

That was my rookie hazing humbling moment. She sauntered off, Pinky Tuscadero strawberry quick puma sneakers pounding the tiles like a runway cat to the aerobics room. My eyes followed her into that room of mirrors, where she shared a belly laugh with the Armenian woman. No doubt about me. I looked away, trying to hear what they were saying. When I looked back, she was gone. Vanished like Han on the island in Enter the Dragon.  

I waited a few minutes to get up. I felt lightheaded and saw that an old timer had seen the entire failed attempt. His silent sympathy shaking of the head was oddly encouraging. I shrugged jumpy gestures like Rodney Dangerfield, we both laughed. 

I was alone in this city. It was huge, and I felt like I needed someone to talk to. Anyone, on my frequency. 

Two Fridays later, my phone is ringing at 4:46 AM. Its Linda. She cant talk. She called to tell me she was going to call me later that day. Who does that? She didnt say when before hanging up. I fell back to sleep and didn’t expect to hear from her again. 

She calls back at 7:30 P.M.

“I want to see you, come over, let me cook for you.”

No apology, no explanation. She asked what I was doing. I didnt want to admit that I was in the middle of doing laundry on a Friday night, in one of the hottest summers in LA. 

She says, “Bring it”.

As excited, as I was to hang out with Yoga pants, I was at the same time, not feeling the frail integrity of her no-call-back behavior. I had to set my precedence that I was a man you dont leave hanging. A man with options. A man that you treat as you want to be treated. “What’s your address?”

EAST LOS

About 90 minutes later, I pulled into her apartment complexs parking lot, carrying a huge plastic hamper of dirties.

I was curious to see Linda in her element. You probably don’t know much about LA, but East Los” is a highly respected Mexican Barrio. Pronounced Varrio. A backdrop often mentioned in the West Coast hip-hop I was getting accustomed to. Id be lying if I said my head wasnt on swivel when I stepped out of the car, quickly finding the staircase to her unit.   

Before I knock on the door, an aroma has my nostrils flexing. Perking. The seasoning scent of home cooking. I hear Cal TjaderSoul Sauce” oozing out of the grease spattered windows. Linda got mad points. Three knocks and here comes pointy heels thudding across the linoleum to the door.

The sticky door pulls back. Opening and wow – her face. Linda was beautiful. I was looking at a classic feature movie star. She hugged me, leaning in and kissing my cheek. One of those greeting kisses, all sound, and no lips. Her second-floor 2-bedroom pad was decorated with plants. Tall and small floor-to-wall. A forty-gallon aquarium humming. Three relaxed, mean mug pirhannas occupy the corners. Framed posters of Julio Ceasar Chavez, Roberto Clemente, and Oscar DeLa Hoya. The shag carpet was frog-foot green. I had to swallow my smile because whatever she was cooking was smoking up the house, and had my mouth watering. 

Before I could react or relax, she was tugging my arm in a hurry to get back into the kitchen. Wait, she wasn’t pulling me in there, she held out her hand, until I realized she wanted my car keys. She walked off to a hallway table, tossing them into a metal bowl in the company of loose change, three lighters, a brand new fitted Dodgers hat, and her keys. My eyes tilted, appraising the quilted patterns on the cooking apron she was wearing. Good Lord! Linda didnt have anything underneath.

Before I could think of anything to say, or how to play it cool – she was waving her hands in a circle.  Whatever shes doing, shes not communicating with me. Suddenly, something shifts in the back left corner of the living room.

Footsteps.

Linda was introducing me to… her son.

His name was Mykil. I thought it was an Arabic name. She corrected me saying she just liked the spelling, but his name was Mike. Mykil was small for a four-year-old, dressed in fluffy flannel pajamas with matching bear-face slippers. Mykil seemed to love me at first sight. He hugged me, hitting me with the tattered, stuffed white rhino he was holding. Mykil was certainly going to be heart-breaker handsome when he got older. Cute little fella had Squidward’s jaw with a deep groove Travolta chin dimple. Linda’s high-speed hand signals asked Mykil to show me his fort. His eyes began to swell again. 

Anxious and darting, the little mister could not wait to show me the rest of his toys, and how he plays with them. With a smile nobody could resist he grabbed my wrist, pulling me into the corner of the living room.

Linda stood on a chair to make a theatric point. Making sure we both saw her rolling her eyes. Relieving me of my laundry basket, she slinked off around the corner en route to the laundry room. 

Mykil and I commence to pass the football, throwing Nerf darts, and kicking a soccer ball. I made him lose his footing by using a clever dribbling trick I learned from watching Edson Buddle highlights. 

Mykil and I were wearing Viking helmets and knight’s armor, guzzling imaginary grog from plastic goblets in a fort made out of plastic bricks. 

Linda’s Bachata playlist bumped new joints I’d never heard of in the kitchen. Every time I turned back, she was cutting up something new, dumping it into the bubbling pot. All the while, bringing me Mezcal cocktails with freshly strangled pink grapefruit, topped off with fizzing green citrus Jaritos. 

Mykil had so much damned energy. Laughing with the fast pitch of a Wonka Munchkin. After foam barbarian axe battles, Im starting to experience battery drain. Of course, hes merely ramping up. I sit his hyper ass down on the plastic-covered sofa, reading him a story. How come childrens books are so damned short? Im turning pages, and making up alternate storylines. Performing silly voices, growls, farm animal lingo, doing the snort laugh, really getting into it. Hes loving it, cackling like tickle torture.

His stomach is empty. I keep glancing into the kitchen for indicators. Shes on the phone. Rocking her hips, neck, and shoulders to the Bachata, yammering in chopped Cholita slang with her Prima.

I meander into Linda’s domain trying to catch hints of her creation. She orders me out with the flutter of long nail shop fingers. Whatever she’s slow-stirring in that army pot, every single scrumptious ingredient is coming up foreign to my scent detector. The whole ambiance had me open. Single Mom with a sexy accent, holding it down, raising a nice kid the best she could. Passionate about culinary arts. Gorgeous as all get out. Naked under that apron.

Mykil is bouncing off the shrink-wrap sofa like a wet gremlin. I can already see hes going to be up all night. I grabbed the Nerf football, it was like handling an orange. I threw it long, purposely too high for him to catch. It bounced off the wall. The kid had determination, diving over the sofa to make the catch after the ricochet off the wall. He timed the bounce – landing in the kitchen right behind Linda – arm extended in a Sports-Center, one-handed catch.

I had to clap for that. 

We switched to wrestling. He acted like he didn’t want to, then jumped off the sofa, wrenching my neck. Flinging him off, I had to watch that little fella. He tried to get slick kicking me in the pills. Linda didn’t see any of this. I bouncer-ejected him into the castle. This was the beginning of what would be my first West coast girlfriend. I was bonding with both of them. He needed a man in his life. He was such a smart kid. 

Linda hung up the phone, suddenly darting out of the kitchen, and down the long hallway. I heard metal laundry washing machine doors klanging in the laundry room.

That was when I snuck into the kitchen to the fridge. My roving eyes lock on a zip-lock pack of butcher’s slice dark meat turkey. The fridge popped open. Pulling out white bread, mayo, and yellow mustard. Slapping together a sandwich. Butcher knife. Cutting it into two slices. I ran it to Mykil. He hugged me. I was motioning that he needed to eat it fast. Linda would not understand if she came back in and saw me feeding him this close to dinner. 

I whispered incentives to Mykil. The deal was that if he ran into his room, counting to a hundred, I’d be hiding when he got done, and he could find me. He had to finish the sandwich before he came out, and if he found me, we could play soccer, again.

Something on Linda’s stove was burning. 

I spun around and… HOLY CRAP!

 A tiny grease fire. Slo-mo flapping bat-like bright orange wings of smoke. It was growing. Choking my watery eyes. Before I could open my mouth to call Linda, the fire alarm was piercing my ear with unstoppable shrieking beeps. 

Fireballs jumping on the drapes. 

Linda runs in wild. Whipping the wind. Swinging a towel like a lasso. Finger-signaling Mykil to his room. At this point, it’s not cute, and I’m feeling awkward that he knows his Mom is naked under that apron. This was weird. This was LA. I felt like the star of a Bowfinger weird and pervy film for being here. Linda rushed past me going for the sink. Filling the drink mixer that still had a little Mezcal in it. 

Before I could “Noooooooo!” She was throwing water on the crackling mini-inferno, making it five times worse.  

Luckily, I knew what to do from surviving the lesson of burning up my apartment in college with my roommate, Demetrius. Linda and I tore open a five-pound bag of flour and started chucking handfuls into the pot. The stove. The curtains. Fortunately, we were able to catch everything in time. Getting rid of that smell was going to require a new carpet, not to mention the blinds needed to be replaced. I offered to buy and install a new set of curtains from Home Depot. Her landlord might like the new look. We’re sitting on the sofa watching the glimmer shapes in the floating dust particles in the air. It was snowing in here. We laughed, wiping each other down.

Dinner was off the menu, and she was too tired to do all that again. I asked her what it was, she said it was better that I didnt know. She’s apologizing. I felt bad right after I told her not to worry about it, she started sniffling. Tears running down her face. I closed the distance with a hug. I said I’d take her out for breakfast at whatever five-star hotel she fancied. Good thing I had a hoagie before I arrived.

9:45 PM

Fans blowing. Tiny flames tremble on Vanilla candles. Were on the floor. She’s playing with my hair next to the sofa. Mark Anthony crooning in the background. Im telling her about Cleveland, and how much I’m enjoying my move to LA for film school. She was on her 7th drink, and not caring about my detailed film curriculum. 

I left her there and walked into Mykil’s room to check on him. He was out cold. Snoring. Tryptophan. I picked him up, carrying him back into the living room. Depositing him drooling on the sofa behind where we were lying. He was down for the night. 

Willy BoboSpanish Grease” comes on, and shes sashaying across the room, smiling with a seductive, kissy-face calculating look in her eyes. She’s with the liquor again. This time, she’s out of Jaritos and muddles a dripping fresh wedge of grapefruit into Sprite and a double shot of Mescal. She wasn’t done, dribbling drops of blue curacao, and grenadine.

I put my hand out, but she didn’t make that for me. That was for her. I laughed. She sat beside me on the sofa letting me taste it. Damn. It kinda reminded me of Ecuador. 

Linda called it the Rizzo, I clocked the Dodgers hat, earlier.  

Linda kills her drink in one dump-down-the-drain gulp. Grabbing my chin. Smooshing her scrunched face into mine. Pressing a thumped lip, slow, hot, and glossy besos on my cheek, to make sure I wasn’t mad.

Im not mad.

She got up and splashed me a messy Mezcal. 

I didnt know this person. Shes lucky I didnt think my life was in danger with that fire. A few more seconds, and this whole, rotten-lumber townhouse would have gone up like a fireworks factory. Im giving her more doubt benefits than maybe she deserves. She knew I wasnt trippin’ by the scrunch I returned. I got all-macho and matched her by murdering my drink in one, loud, throat-mulching gulp. I looked at her like I did something. The way she laughed let me know she was no one to drink against. With an “Oh yeah?”, she went back into the kitchen, concocting two new ones.

Mezcal was no joke. I could feel this drink shoving me into the penalty box. She returned, tripping over my feet and letting off a sexy shriek, spilling most of it onto my lap.

Next thing I know, were kissing. So much for finding out everything about her. I laugh to myself saying “Oh well, I guess some women arent into sapiosexuals.Shes sitting on me like a lap dancer. I wasnt expecting the kisses to get so steamy. Picking her up, and carrying her to her bedroom. Down the hallway, passing posted pictures in frames of her and Mykil, and Vatos locos who loved them perfect pencil brow Cholitas.

I kick open the bedroom door. Two vanilla coffee candles on the window ledge. I deposit her on the queen size filled with eight pillows. She lands face down. Before she can turn to face me, I pull her apron string – and roll her over. She punches the pillows to the floor. Im ripping myself out of my clothes like Im on stage. Linda’s South of the border thatchery was manicured into the eloquent shape of a heart. I crawl on top of her, devouring her neck like a neck-rolling Vampire. The touch of my tongue on her nipples caused her to hiss to my descending kisses. 

The cunning linguist was sinking Australia. Bursts of big mouth hot breath like a flamethrower lit up her moistening membranes. I told her how hot she looked when I saw her walking at the mall. How much I appreciated her cooking for me, and introducing me this fast to her son. Linda let out a chorus of grunting groans. The kind that subliminally complains of a stingy ex. She’s shivering. Shaking. Silent screaming curse words in slow breathy Spanish. I don’t know what she was saying, but let me tell you, the flow of that angry cadence was some of the most amazing words anyone has ever said. 

She pulls my hair. Snatching me up to look at her. Cradling my jaw. Slapping sparks out of me before guiding my mouth back down into the dark slick never-ending, soft folds of her fascia.

I felt my eyes closing. 

My lips and tongue danced all over her geography. She grabbed my ears. Pushing me away, slapping me again, and pulling me back. I stop to gaze up at her. We trade smiles in the dark. This was an awesome moment.

She shoves her way out from under me laying me down on my back, positioning between my legs. Dirty Spanish whispers tumbling out in a storm of wind into my ear. Licking my neck. Talking in kisses along my jawline. Swiveling tongue flutters circling my right nipple. Big wet lips traveling past my ribs to my hip bone. Every time she stopped, she’d curse me out in Spanish. I have to admit, that turned me on so much, I was going to get a dictionary on the way home at some all-night drug store. Steamy exhales and she’s gripping my girth with wet heat. Her tongue was a sorcerer’s weapon, and I was a shackled medieval dungeon prisoner. Wishing I was wearing Mykil’s plastic armor and Viking helmet. Those thoughts of stopping the action to run to the living room and coming back costumed saved me from the siren’s trance. I didn’t even know how caught up I was. Damn, how much time had passed? I was free. Rolling over. Flipping her over like a stack of griddle cakes in a buttery saucepan. Positioning her onto all fours. Snatching her hair. She starts in on me again, this time in even slower, breathier Espanol. 

Our rhythm effortlessly synchs into beast choreography. Cannibal shit. Heating the cauldron. We hit a hallucinogenic flow that I was disco floor grooving to, for what seemed like an hour. There was no way we were going to spend any time together, without me learning Spanish. Her Spanish had this flow, like the echos of a harp slowly sinking in erupting volcano lava. It was so sexy, it made me laugh. The face you make when you hear a dope beat for the first time. Every word. Every sound she made, fueled my ego.

… CLICK!

The bedroom lights pop on. The door swung open.

It was Mykil. Wide eye whimpering. Running in with his stuffed rhino. Linda opened her arms inviting him to dive into her hug. He catapulted himself into the bed with us. Linda leaned in kissing his forehead. Mykil nestled himself between us. Linda sends a smile over to me. Unloading a whisper. Musta had a bad dream. Give me a minute?” 

I assure her with a compassionate smirk. She points out of the room. Mykil turns and hops off immediately. She slides off the bed, grabbing her apron, and my wet clothes from the floor. Following her son into his room for a little tuck-in time.

Mykil was such a cool kid, I wasnt going to like it if she cut his time short for me. Twenty-five satisfying minutes later Linda tiptoes back in, tied up in that apron. She stands at the edge of the bed. Her apron hits the floor and: 

Wait a while, until I know hes asleep.”

She snuzzled next to me, spooning. We sat swimming in the silence of each other’s gentle breathing. I was running my hands down her thighs when Mykil ran back into the room. He had the rhino. Inserting himself in the same snuggle position. Between us, with his back to me. He doesnt see me smile at him. Linda and I made eye contact. She blew me a kiss with her eyes. I smiled like the luckiest guy in LA and whoosh! blew out the candles.

The three of us passed out…

5:15 AM

A heavy keychain hits the lock. The deadbolt spring clicked out of the socket.  Somebody was coming in through her front door. My eyes were sticky-gunk-shut. Im smiling, thinking Linda snuck into the kitchen to get water and snacks. I was so lucky to have someone so considerate. I was hoping she wasn’t out there making another drink. My eyes popped open when I heard her breathing next to me. Linda wasnt in the fucking kitchen. She was still in bed with me. Hard-whispers woke her:

You have a roommate?”

Her eyes snapped white like flashbulbs. Before her mouth could open, the door slammed. Hard, like, whoever did it, wanted her ruin her sleep. It was pitch black in here:

Get in the closet!”

OH SHIT! 

SHIT!

SHIT!

SHIT!

Reaching for my clothes. Where are my clothes? Linda put them with the other stuff in the washer.  Mykil is asleep. Linda jumped out of bed. Wrapped in blankets. Rushing to the front room. Colliding with some raspy voice dude. Whoever he was, he was pissed, hissing fast accusatory Spanish. By analyzing the bass in his whiny voice, Im trying to conjure visions of what this guy looked like. The banter was igniting. Things were getting hot out there. Her voice was agitated and trembling. I heard light pushing and shoving. Damn, part of me instinctively wanted to go out there and protect her. Another part remembered this was the barrio, and that could be her husband. He could be with his boys. They could all be drunk. Strapped. Suddenly, the entire house fell into a silent stalemate.

My clothes are down the hall. Wet. Stuck to the walls of the washer. Never made it into the dryer.

Grunts. The sounds of thapping fist impacts in a scuffle in the living room had me tight. They’re saying hurtful things in Spanish. I can tell by the ugly tone both are using. I’m naked in here. Looking for a balcony, fire escape, and measuring the clearance under the bed. Too many plants, beer bottles, candles, and framed pics along the window. I had to wait it out, hoping she was going to come tell me he left. Im Ancy. Gently closing the door so I dont get shot.

Whatever that guy out there just did, Linda is crying. Not a helpless crying, but a “Don’t make me do what we both know I don’t want to do” type of crying. Linda could hold her own. I was so uncomfortable knowing I should help her. I mushed my head against the door to see if he was at least by himself. Linda wasn’t scared, but the sound of her voice woke Mykil. He starts fucking crying. Poor fella, this is the second time he woke up to no Mommie in sight.

Little man sits up in bed with a pre-cry distraught frown. He’s about to start eagle screeching for his Mom. I can’t let that happen. With vocal volumes in the next room steadily escalating, and Mykil about to flip, all I could do was cringe for impact. 

Mykil sees me standing there trying to be invisible, frozen-frantic in the closet. Naked. Looking at him for advice. I motion a helpless plea for silence with a crooked index finger in front of pursed lips.

Linda screams! She wanted him to leave. Huffing grunts under swinging punches sound like shes slapping sides of beef in a meat locker. I didn’t know if he was hitting her. She screamed for help. That did it. His cowardice triggered something inside of me. I stepped out of the closet, snorting like a bull with two fists balled up.

I took a step closer to the door, unsure of what the hell I was going to do. I grabbed a soccer trophy from the dresser, stopping at the threshold. Damn, I was really about to run up on this dude in his house… when… I heard the unmistakable sound of a ‘click-clack’. 

Linda stopped yelling at him. I saw something on the wall, it was him raising his heater in the living room candle’s shadow. I put the trophy down, backpedaling on the balls of my feet tucking myself neatly into the closet.

Mykil thought this was funny. I’m trying to find something in this closet that fits, these are his shirts. I stepped out and opened another seeing dresses and skirts hanging on hangers. 

Damn-it! Mykil is crying.  

I jump out of the closet grabbing him before he gets loud. I start shaking him. Lullaby style, gentle sing-songy guarantees that Mommy was going to be back in a minute.

Linda and her male caller were back at it again. The explosions of their deep, bitter-seeded hatred for each other shot out like whistling missiles in gutter Spanglish.

WHAM!

A thunderous whack sends Linda to the carpet, He’s on the move to see his son. Only, Linda locks his ankle, tugging his leg. Hes kicking her off with his other foot. Shes not letting go.

He’s dragging her. He’s getting closer. He cocks back and smacks her in the face. She lets go. Now hes down on the floor. Crawling. All fours. Changing his voice, talking like a cartoon character, more frightening than funny. 

He knows how to make Mykil laugh. Mykil hears his Dad approaching with that crazy chortle and hops up perked up. Ready to jump off the bed, but I’m holding him. Mykil squirms. Struggling to get away from me.

The scent of a Modelo-soaked, Doritos breath Vato coming around the corner made me lose my cool. He crawled in like a two-hundred-year-old turtle. There he was, covered in sweat. A bandanna. Two gold chains. Elegant ink. A crisp, clean white tank top. Limo-tint locs. Tan, creased Dickies over brand new black brownies.

Those dark shades fell to the floor. The first thing his bleary spinners could register was… my bare feet. His burning vision traced up fast, and I was holding Mykil. 

Bouncing his son. 

Naked.

In-his-house.

This was as flight or fight as it can get. Skunked with weed, and a look of promised violence in his glassy, blood-blasted, eggnog eyes. East Los street life stands up and says:

Who the fuck are you, S.A?”

He fell into the door, Tequila robbing him of his balance and focus. Scrambling to his feet. Those were the throbbing veins, raging eyes of a killer. 

No time to debate diffusion dialogue with this dude. Without thinking, I tossed his son at him, like lobbing a concrete block. He bobbled Mykil as I ran past. Out into the front room. 

 Swiping my car keys from that dish.  

Linda looked up at me from the floor. Shifting a sore jaw with despondent eyes raw from crying. I didnt say shit. Jumping over her like a running back in the hole. Moving fast to the door before her man got up and came running for his heater. I snatched at the door knob. Hurling that rickety, cheap lumber open. Keeping my head low, counting the seconds until he started shooting. Plodding down the steps. Dick bouncing. Busting into a feral sprint. Flinching across the diamond-tip gravel parking lot toward the whip. 

Keys slid the groove, and I was in. Cold leather seats freezing my jewels. 

Smoking tires squealing screaming off.

Windows down. Cold air fills up my lungs. The difficulty in breathing told me how stupid I was for trying to out-drink her, in her house, with her bottle. My raging blood pressure was a splashy cocktail of adrenaline and fear. Head on swivel. LAPD was everywhere. To my left. To my right. At the corner three blocks behind me. No way was I about to get caught speeding in the hood, naked. 

I had to get off the streets. Gambling on a few back routes to find the freeway. After four turns, I knew I wasn’t tailed. Speeding drunk and naked wasn’t the issue. I was dangerously low on gas. Twenty minutes later, I’m getting off the 5 freeway to the 101 to Lankershiem in no traffic. If you live in LA, you know the safe times to float unseen. I was in that sweet spot, right before the early birds hit Saturday rush hour. I avoided the Police. Now, all I had to do was get into my building without running into anyone I knew. 

I took the stairs to the third floor. Swift around corners in the hallway. Finally, with my door in sight, I was safe. 

One of the Barbers from the legendary Chop Shop known as “Get In The Cut”, owned by Ali Rucker, lived in my building. He was leaving his apartment to hit the gym before work. I ran past him right as he was coming out. The look on his face was hilarious. He was holding the LA Times. I snatched it out of his hand, covering myself as I kept running. He cursed me out while I quick-keyed into my apartment. Good thing I had my keys, they charge you after your third lockout.

My Barber Ali’s face was still covered. He knew of my penchant for adventures, and said:  Whatever you just did, come see me Friday at seven!”

My nod guaranteed a good one.

Whew!

I was inside and sat on the sofa catching my breath, gazing at the newspaper. Weekend death counts at 397, 59% percent higher than the previous year. 

I was one of the lucky ones.

Linda called early the next morning, her whisper was cold and stoic. I assumed she’d be unhinged with embarrassment, and gushing avalanches of apologies. She wasn’t. I assumed we’d both be very awkward about everything that went down and want to talk about it. Linda wasn’t calling to chat. Instead, she was short to the point, whispering to set up a time to meet on Monday for lunch. Same smoothie place where we met at the Topanga Mall’s food court. I asked if she was okay, and she said: “Come get your stuff” and hung up.   

Friday at seven. The famous NoHo Barbershop is packed with models, actors, rappers, and recognizable regulars from the stand-up comedy circuit. Ali cut the stereo, turned off the television, stood on his chair, and took the floor. The stage was set for me to spill it. 

I was nervous but let it go, and it killed. The standing-laughs I got as a response, convinced me to write it into a script. Ali said I could use his shop to shoot the book ends, and I found a friend’s apartment and set out to shoot a micro-budget short film later that month.  

 

THE SUNDANCE FILM FESTIVAL

The collaboration premiered at the Atom Films’ Digital Filmmakers Showcase. Utah is an awesome filmmaker experience with unlimited networking potential. I don’t suggest driving from LA, but shoestring budgets afford few options. Once you arrive, if you think a drink is necessary to take the edge off, you have to purchase a license. Yes, a drinking license is required to enter bars. I was just glad to be in Utah. 

The Chop Shop played without Q&A, in a standing-room-only basement screening theatre. I sat center seat back row, fidgety, emptying a quiet bag of gummy bears. Nervous that the jokes wouldn’t hit the way they did at the Barber Shop. This guy next to me was cracking up with a contagious squawk-laughter. Every setup ignited that same howl. His laugh was so infectious, that it was pulling other people into laughing. I was starting to like this guy. He was going to get a fist pound.

When the lights came on, and everybody was rushing to get to the next film on their program, I looked up and it was Robert Redford.

Robert freakin’ Redford!

The Sundance Kid!

Johnny Hooker!

Jay Gatsby!

My sinking heart started beating so fast, I broke out in a shirt-soaking sweat. Out of all the execs from the many new media companies at the VIP-only networking parties that I wasn’t cool enough to get into, not one came close to being more important than The Sundance Kid. 

This was his festival, his town. His state. I tried to say something. Anything to make him turn around. My throat seized shut, I was suffocating, feeling my tongue tie itself into knots. 

I was the actor in the Chop Shop film, all he had to do was look at me. I was in Utah for a deal, same as every other blood-sucking parasite prostitute in the room. I had to get him to turn around. As soon as he did, I wasn’t going to have to pitch the concept or convince him it was funny. All I had to do was tell him it was a true story. I reached out to tap him on the shoulder. He was too far away in the loud room. I yelled out his name. Then, I yelled out each of his character names. His people whisked him out of there in a hurry. I turned and ran the other way to the aisle, weaving through the crowd to the lobby, and to the exit doors. I ran outside. Surely, I’d catch him outside. This time I knew what to say… 

He was gone. I ran up to exiting cars to see if he was in the backseat of any of them. All he had to do was see my face, and I’d knock on his window asking for two seconds. As upset as I was, I tipped my hat to the Sundance Kid for vanishing into thin air like a ghost.  

Oh well, Utah was fun.

 I’ll be back with another project soon!

Trust me. 


HEINEKEN
“NOW YA KNOW”

As long as I can remember, I’ve always hated commercials. The annoying ones that don’t know how to sell the product. The thirty seconds of your life you can’t get back. I hate commercials so much that when I see a good one, I make a point to support the product. I absolutely LOVE coming up with ad campaigns. So, I went for it, and decided that I was going to cold-call my way into a few meetings, pitching myself to LA’s big advertising agencies. Hundreds calls gave me dead end brick walls. If you dig around deep enough, you could learn that there was a monthly event in Santa Monica, showcasing spec commercials by aspiring directors. Word was, that the right people from the agencies attended these events. That’s all I needed to hear!

I’ll never forget the event, the drinks were $21.00. Needless to say, I enjoyed a few cups of refreshing tap water. Okay, so I’m working the room, eyes roving, mingling my way into meeting anybody who could get me close to meeting the right people – to get in the room. I was ready to get a deal at a global advertising agency like Wieden+Kennedy. You could taste something in the air. As if someone in that room was going to be the exception.

I’m a decent schmoozer, but the many talent scouts would only talk to members on THE LIST.

Rejection is something I’ve learned to wear well in this town.  I was determined to hit at least one jump shot tonight, one way or another. At the time, I was temping at Beverly Hills High School, working in the library.

The night didn’t land in the trash, I met a few helpful filmmakers. Some of their specs that screened that night were really amazing. To say the creative energy in that room left me inspired, was an understatement.

One night – while out drinking with my childhood best friend Abdul, an idea smacked me in the face. We were both relatively new to LA, and quite entertained by observing the complexity of our disastrous dating experiences. Abdul and I could actually compete comparing each other’s monumental failures. I was particularly amused by the way single women discretely appraised men from across the room. Bars in LA are jam-packed with single women who won’t look at you.  Abdul discretely nudged me to gaze across the room at someone whom he thought to be my type. He was right. She was with her two friends, and they were reading a menu. I made my approach to their booth. Respectfully acknowledging them all before locking eyes with the one I wanted to speak to. Before I could say my name, they resumed reading their menus. I was shot down in six seconds flat, and dragged my feet back to join Abdul. The Bartender out of pity, slid two bottles of Heineken down to us. The ratio in the room was maybe 15-1. Yet, nobody was talking. I saw someone else that I was interested in meeting. This time, she was starring right at me. That was the kind of invite that removed any anxiety.  I got up to approach and she immediately diverted her glance in such a harsh manner, I knew she was in fact, not inviting me to meet her. Still, I said hello and she ignored me. I detoured back to the booth to join Abdul. We laughed so loud, the shrugging Bartender couldn’t help joining in.  There were so many singles here, I tried not to be discouraged. I didn’t want to talk to anyone else, because by now, I was the entertainment for the cheap seats. I picked up my Heineken bottle, covering my eyes with it. Abdul tapped me, his eyes were pointing at another single lady. His body language screaming “Get over there before somebody beats you to it!” I sat back unbothered in my booth, peeking at her through the green bottle.

That’s when it hit me. The bottle was going to help me. Check this award-winning spec commercial out.

F____ YOU! PAY ME!
& DRUMLINE 2

The story of creating the film: “F_ YOU!, PAY ME!” was born in the chaos of getting paid to write DRUMLINE 2.

SANTA MONICA BEACH

They say something in the salt water does something to the breezy air – that boosts creativity. I like the quiet. The sound of the crashing ocean waves, that’s why I’m jogging so early in the morning. There’s hardly any people here. I’m two hundred feet from the Pier, in ankle-deep sand, when a guy bumps into me. Knocked awkward, we turn to face each other, both blinded by the intense zap of the sun. Covering my eyes, peeking in between the slits in my fingers, all I could make out was this sandy blonde guy squinting at me. He looked kinda agitated. Almost like he was losing patience waiting for an apology. The way he was sorta hopping, checking his watch, and the puglisit’s angle in which his feet were positioning, I thought maybe he was planning punches.

How wrong I was. The pop-quizzy stare turned into a suddenly shaken smile, he said:

“Bro!? I KNOW YOU!”

Now, I’m good with names, even better with faces, but that sun was getting the best of me. He was short with sugar cookie features. I stood there trying to decipher the voice when he reminded me. Only, it didn’t ring a bell. His quick ramble said that he was the second intern many years ago at a studio where I pitched. Wow, the coffee guy stuck with it, dodged the teeth, and moved up into his own shingle. I was actually proud of him. He said:

“We all really loved that African American Fraternity thriller you brought us, and you, we loved you and why you wanted to do the film in the first place. We even talked about doing a trilogy, but as usual, there was a guy. Always a guy, right? Yeah, no, I’m sure you don’t remember… Trust me, it’s better you don’t. Some schmuck who let his ego in the room messed it all up.”

That frat story was one of my favorite scripts, so I asked him to please detail who the schmuck was, and how it all went to shit. He kept checking his watch, and I could at this time tell by the hop, that he had to run to the mensroom, he didn’t have time or desire to go into the past. Our cordial catch-up revealed that he was now the head guy in a certain niche division with acquisition authority at a major studio. Urban films were in, and they were looking for a writer to do the sequel to “Drumline”.

Of course, I’d seen it.

The widening my eyes told him how much I liked it. I couldn’t believe that I was being offered the chance to pitch. Okay, sure. Me? Really? I had so many questions. Before I could dig for details, the hop ended our meeting. We exchanged numbers and he sprinted towards Shudders restaurant.

Here’s where it gets crazy. I get home that day, and watch “Drumline” again. Not ten minutes after it ended, my phone rang. It’s him. What? Wait. Check out what he said:

“Hey, good running into you today, literally hahahahaah! (Two additional voices polite-chuckling on the phone) But seriously, thanks for agreeing to pitch. I have Studio Exec Urban Division A, and the head of Department B on the line, with me now. Go ahead. Ready when you are.”

“You’ve got to be shittin’ me!?” felt like a very appropriate thing to say.  I played it cool, very nervous while assuming that he went to work that morning, under relentless studio pressure, ran into his Boss’s office and said he had something. Maybe he said that he found THE GUY? Whatever he said to get his colleagues on the phone so fast, here they were, and I wasn’t in on it.

If you’ve ever tapped into your flow state without warning, this was my moment, so I took it.  I felt myself taking a huge inhale, shutting my eyes… visions started popping up. Only the imagery was of me seeing what I always say I love about going with the uncertainty of thinking you’re falling in love, dating, communication, and the butterflies of music you can feel.

On the spot, I created a fantasy teenage love scenario, kicking what would basically be the equivalent of an acapella freestyle.

I talked about being a shorty wanting to belong to the cool clique, wanting to impress the girl you can’t stop thinking about, and what songs were instrumental in me becoming a man.

When I was done, I said “The End”.

Silence. my eyes snapped open as I sat there waiting for any kind of response. Wow! How long had I been talking for? How long had they been disconnected? Was my phone dead? I started laughing, embarrassed and was two seconds from hanging up when, CLICK! They came back on from being muted. Someone cleared their throat and said:

“Well told. Thank you. Uh, yeah, we’ll be in touch.”

That was it? Huh? What the hell? Nothing? No feedback, no questions? I know my story wasn’t perfect. I wanted some feedback questions, so I could lay bricks building background layers.  They weren’t on the phone anymore. I was mad at myself for the rest of the day. I knew my angle didn’t suck, was I too long winded?

I looked up through the clouds and begged for clarity. That’s God. The arrow meant for you will not miss the target. That’s Hollywood. That’s Gangsta. Oh well.

On to the next.

Only I couldn’t get over it.

I went to bed that night really hating myself. Focusing on flaws. Protagonistic interpretation. Dead-end sentencing. Cliche plot solutions. They laughed at my jokes, were those laughs fake, or nah? Am I really that naive?  Maybe my teen love story was too adult?  What if they thought I tried to exploit the sexual vulnerability of the female characters?

This maze in a mild haze of depression kept me from being able to fall asleep. At 3:00 a.m., I made some cereal with not enough milk and walked back to the couch crunching, watching it again.

This time, analyzing. Motivations. Weaknesses. Themes. Red herrings. Planted timebombs. A lot became clear this time, I really liked what the director Charles Stone did. He photographed the humidity of the marching band’s high-stakes world. The pageantry. The adrenaline rush of adolescent first-dose, nascent adventures into freedom.

Several days of guzzling self-deprecating energy drinks passed before the phone rang again. It was them.

The Studio Execs.

Inviting me down to their offices for a formal. Daaaamn!

Now, I was really going to mess this up! I didn’t write what they liked down, there was no way that I was going to be able to repeat that telling. Whoever it was on that phone indicated that they were going to be bringing even more people into a room to hear me do it. Okay, I had something for them.

SANTA MONICA BEACH

I went for a jog. Clearing away my insecurities.

I started writing in a dark candle-lit coffee shop with Latin Jazz and hip-hop blasting. Finishing that night. I had to because the pitch was the next morning!!!!!!

20th CENTURY FOX STUDIOS

The waiting room was full of famous screenwriters. I was the only no-name. One by one, I was ready to watch them get their names called and go in. I knew they had time to prepare. These guys had Agents and fancy boutique managers. To my shock, I was called in first.

Five people sitting across from me at a table. I started to sit, and they said that they wanted me to stand. Facing them. Normally, this would be a sweaty situation, but I brought something with me. A mini-cassette player. I declined the water they offered, and it was on. This was big-league stuff. This was all business. They weren’t into small talk for pleasantries:

Studios know what works and aren’t paid to play probabilities with millions of dollars. The fact that I didn’t know what they liked and wanted to bring into the sequel forced me to gamble. Holding my breath, letting out my first words, I wanted it to be about the Guy Orlando inspired. The Leonard Roberts character, and how he graduated and found no luck getting hired as an assistant band leader at any college. An unexpected call catches him one day with news of an interview. He found out the job was the band leader of a high school in Miami.

They didn’t kick me out of the room, so I kept going. Little by little, exhaling. I hit’em with the West Side Story, Romeo and Juliet of an African American boy falling in love with an Afro-Cuban girl. The tool was Leonard Roberts the bandleader, fusing hip hop with Afro-Cuban Jazz as a strategy to win the halftime battle of the bands. Stories within the Afro-Cuban sound carry many lessons, and the romance was where these lessons were going to come from. Changing boy, girl, bandleader, and band.

The pitch was going decent. Nobody thought anything of me reaching into my pocket. The mash-up mix I made started playing, and I adjusted my story with the switch-ups. The beats synched up and I laid heavily into adjusting my cadence into a rhythmic delivery to finish the story.

My words came to a halt when I said “The End” to the five silent stoic faces. I thanked them for their time, reminded them who my Attorney was, and walked out.

The Guys in the lobby were trying to read my face for victory, because it’s common to sell the deal in the room, and not even let the people waiting have a chance to be heard. I was not wearing that kind of confidence when I gave most of them head nods, and fist pounds.

All I could think of was “Why didn’t they tell me what they wanted, and then let me take that and run with it?” The agony of not knowing if you’re good enough – when the launch of your career is on the line – basically begging before the feet of the people with the power – can drive you to your vices.

Over a month passed before I got a call from my Attorney. She said:

“They want you to write the sequel to Drumline!”

I played it cool and said I’d stop by the office soon, hung up, and started crying right there on the floor in my kitchen.

DEALING WITH THE STUDIO

Everyone has a different studio experience, mine was great. Development meetings could have one to ten people present, all zig-zagging with opinions. If you don’t want to get replaced, it’s your job to make everybody happy. The Boss of it all was at every meeting. She cared about the weight of every word on every line on every page. She usually had notes. My first meeting was frightening, as I learned my place.  Naturally, I was so excited to be there, that I actually thought that I was the reason why everyone was there. Gushing with artistic freedom, I couldn’t help but say what was on my mind. I suggested a spinning newspaper transition to educate the entire high school of certain building events. The Boss didn’t acknowledge it, glossing over the subject in a way that may have been rejecting the necessary time-saving concept. I interrupted her, bringing things back to the list of reasons I had for my spinning newspaper trick. She exhaled, leaning her hands on the desk, adjusting her glasses, saying:

“No.”

“Yeah, but wait, go with me here for a sec, this is a great way to—“

“—do we have a problem here?”

“No, we don’t.”

And that was that. I didn’t need to argue over that. She probably had most of the film already figured out in her head, OR… she was going to allow Charles Stone creative liberty, and maybe my idea was going to get in the way of that. Who was I? I had no right to compete in this room. You could chew on the tension with metal jaws. One of the Execs broke the silence with a phrase common in development meetings.

“Let’s make a meal of it.”

Nobody saw me shaking my head. Make a what? Okay, we got down to biz, and I was relieved to know that there was less than a paragraph of notes to go home and fix. That took a giant weight off because it meant that the mouse trap balancing act of the structure, and slang-dialogue of the African diaspora urban composition was working with the pacing, tone, and overall positive message that they were looking for.

The script was handed in, and again the waiting game reactivated.

Weeks crawled along. While staying close to the Assistant’s loop, a very critical situation arose. Charles Stone was not going to be directing the sequel. While he was rising in the ranks, rumors flew around about him wanting more money. Who knows the real reason? Not me. I got through on the phone and made an appointment requesting to be the Director. BOOM!

My Attorney thought it was a ballsy move. Walking in with storyboards. Playlists. Miami fashion and photos of high schools with suitable stadiums got their attention. First-timers’ rates are so low, they didn’t say no. Again the waiting…

I lost my apartment and was living with two strippers South of Pico when the call finally arrived. One of the Dancers was notorious for drinking my juice out of the carton and relieving me of my groceries. I had to threaten her, but she laughed and her filthy fingers kept pilfering anything she found in the fridge. This went on far too long. I didn’t know what to do. I tried to put. myself in her shoes… and who has time to shop when you come home from the club at 4:00am wasted on pills, dust, and smoke?

Her Mother was visiting, and they were enjoying a nice family brunch in the kitchen. I entered the kitchen naked, opened the fridge, and clobbered the remainder of my orange juice. They were seated less than ten feet from me in the cramped quarters. I threw the empty carton into the trash, grabbed one of her donuts, leaned up against the sink, and ate it. They paid me little to no mind. The phone was ringing, I took it right there in front of them.

The studio said the film was off. Off as in ‘not being made.’ I asked if I could shop it around to other studios. They said no, because it wasn’t my project. I hung up, got dressed and went for a long bike ride deeper and deeper South of Pico. Some little girl threw rocks at me.

Later, that night, the other Dancer told me later that the food thief and her Mom grew up in a nudist hippie colony. We broke out laughing.

With Charles Stone out, this was it, the first solid, chance to get in the game. I got sick of waiting and called to speak to the Boss. I knew there was no way she was upset with me about that spinning newspaper thing. I took the risk. She took my call and:

“Have you put any thought into the request?”

“Yes, as a matter of fact, I saw your short film. The one where you were dating the married woman, and… it was funny. The thinking we share is that although you can capture comedy, you can’t direct serious drama with real actors.”

CLICK!

The phone went dead. What? Damn. She hung up, I guess I was done. Okay… this was not going to deter me at all.

SANTA MONICA BEACH

Jogging. A few bleak mornings shot by before the idea popped into my head. I remembered the time when I was behind on a few bills and had an interesting phone call with a Debt Collector. He set me up in a most greasy way. He noticed the music playing in the background and said it sounded really nice. Asking what kind of audiophile system I had. He complimented my taste in music and said he was into the same things. He found out I had a rather large collection of vinyl and two techniques turntables. I had things to do, so I ended his curiosity by saying that I’d just started my night job, and didn’t have the money he was calling for.

That’s when his voice changed.

He said he would send some guys to my house when I was at work to take things to match the amount owed. I was about to tell him to take his best shot when I realized… he might know… where I… lived…

I didn’t have a night job, and the fear of being robbed again kept me up at night. This concept battered my confidence each day during my jogs. Suddenly, the idea of bringing back debtor’s prison became the foundation of my plan. The best way to complain about a Government system of oppression without getting shot,  is to go Sci-Fi.

I named the film: “FUCK YOU!, PAY ME!”

I can’t take credit for the phrase borrowed from the film: “GOODFELLAS”, but it fit the temper of that idiot Collection’s Agent. Fuck you, Pay Me was the perfect name for my short film. My Brother, Chris gets the credit for saying that the short film was a hunch predicting the Financial Crisis and the ensuing Great Recession. A little Filmmaker humor. I wrote it in 45 minutes. This was going to be dripping urban intellectual art that I could bring to the Execs who told me I couldn’t do drama. Little did they know, I am drama.

Getting down to biz. The budget was all in, just South of seventy grand.

Prayers went up like determined carrier pigeons.

Networking was always something I struggled with in LA. Not that I’m shy, at all. The thing I have a problem with is faking like I care for the duration of the agonizing small talk. I don’t do well in a room full of shameless opportunists. I went to as many networking events as possible. Finding myself unfortunately crammed into rooms of treasure hunters seeking treasure maps.

I’m a fan of boxing, and used to host open bar, fight parties. My pad was in WLA, two blocks South of Brentwood, just past the 7-11 on Barry. Life was good, I was sitting on a dump truck size lump sum of Drumline writer’s money, and knew the manager of a Valley dive bar who got me wholesale liquor. My bachelor pad was set up real nice. Every single party brought fun people with Zero drama.

Except for the one time a rather obnoxious guy from Jersey, almost got Norris from Philly mad enough to get up off the sofa. Knowing Norris to be a peaceful Brother with his limits, I intervened. Norris is one of my longest, and most cherished friendships. We met in Morgantown, WV attending WVU. More on him and how he saved the day, later.

The fight parties were a big hit. I should have been betting the entire time because my predictions were accurate most of the time. One night, I look over and see Olympian Carl Lewis behind the bar making drinks for five young ladies. He wasn’t just pouring drinks, he was doing flair bartender moves. Throwing the shaker behind his head, pouring four bottles at once, etc. Impressed. More than intrigued, I approached.

Hands down, Carl Lewis was the most fun person I’ve partied with in LA. A quiet type. Once he felt the vibe of the room and got loose, he talked shit, entertaining with his vast stories of behind-the-scenes sports knowledge, international travel, perfectly timed jokes, and heavily opinionated politics. He’d put you on the spot to know where you stood on things. Not to mention, nobody could hang with him when it came to drinking. Luckily I didn’t have to drive.

Deep into the night, Carl confided in me that he had been wanting to act for years, and had been blessed with a few good opportunities. Yet, he appeared unsatisfied.

That was it, I clocked his need instantly. The impenetrable (anti-hater) shell he’d created, being a God of Track and Field was interfering with the very necessary actor’s ability to uncage vulnerability. I explained that I just so happened to be putting together a project. After detailing the sci-fi concept, I mentioned that if he had the skills to be an evil asshole of a Cop, sort of like Harvey Keitel in “Bad Lieutenant”, then we could talk about it one day. Carl doesn’t back down to challenges. I said that I’d see him around, but he stopped me, insisting that I send him the script, now.

It was over a week when I heard from him. This time, he was having a party. A Halloween party at his house in Pacific Palisades. Costumes mandatory.

Carl’s house was on a Pacific Palisades mountain with an ocean view. The place was packed. I’m dressed as a ragtime newsboy with the knickers, cap, vest, and speakeasy flask. Liquor was flowing. Servers floating in and out with bubbling flutes and spicy stuff balancing on crackers. The deeJay blending the proper classic  joints. Casino dealers in the backyard by the pool, flipping decks. Had there been a cash prize for the best costume, I would have lost. This was a party of great extravagance. People were arriving in costumes that put me to shame. Someone came as Gene Simmons from K.I.S.S. Someone came as Robocop. Someone walked in as Darth Vader.  Security guards dressed as Keystone cops. Doran Reed was there. My homie. We chopped it up. Always good to see D. I needed a refill. I looked to the bar, the only person in the party not drinking was clogging up the lane. Guess who?

The one person I needed to find.

The one person I needed to impress.

No, not the studio Boss. Look at God. Look at those carrier pigeons. I was looking dead at – none other than – Lenoard Roberts.

The guy who was going to be the lead of Drumline 2.

I down my drink in a loud gulp, making the Milton Berle face, and made my approach. The conversation went something like this:

“I’ve been looking for you.”

He didn’t know what to make of me. More than ten seconds went by before either of us said anything.

“I wrote Drumline 2, Charles Stone is out, and I said I wanted to direct. They didn’t say no. Only, they shitted on my comedy short, even though it won at Sundance. I know you just got here, but do you have time to step outside to hear what I’m stirring up?”

“Hold up, wait a minute, who the hell are you?”

Laughing. We shook hands exchanging pleasantries, and I broke it down. All the while, he was appraising me with the same jeweler’s eye skepticism as Nick Cannon:

“I didn’t even know they were making another Drumline?”

“Bruh, they are. I alredy got paid to write it. They’re feeling it so much that they’re open to me directing if I can jump through the flaming barbed wire hoops. That’s why I need to hit’em with this gritty, sci-fi short film that you need to be in.”

“Tell ya what I’ll do. Send me Drumline.”

After getting his email, my work was done. I left Leonard the same way I approached him. Staring at me with a lot to process. I thanked Carl for the invite and bounced. The lights were dimming, and you could feel the temperature of the vibe shifting gears. The place was so huge, with parts of the house I didn’t even notice until I was ready to leave. Carl had a karaoke room, and a board game room with some king’s edition Monopoly taking place in various parts of the house. He had a five-car garage with a professional weight room. A backyard deck with tall flickering tiki torches surrounding the pool. Various celebs started arriving. Of the 35 recognizable faces, I zeroed in on Vivica Fox. Whispering into Carl’s ear, I wanted him to introduce me, so I could ask her to be in the film. He said she was super-cool approachable, and easy to talk to. I asked if he thought she’d be down to work. He said she would mos def consider it, but she just booked a film in Canada and was leaving in two days. Damn. She was out. I still went over to meet her. She was mad cool. We kicked it with Spinderella.

The next morning, a 7:00 AM phone call woke me. It was Leonard:

“YO! You eat yet? Meet me for biscuits’n gravy at the Coral Tree on San Vincente!”

CLICK!

Leonard was in. This chess move created some space on the board. A narrow lane with victory in the distance. This positioning was now making me much more confident. This was happening. Wow. My debut film was really going to be directing a successful sequel feature for a major studio. No way the studio Boss could say no when I showed up with Leonard Roberts.

Checkmate!

Now came the hardest part, I had to raise the funds. Those pigeons had work to do. When I say the power of prayer is a virtue of mystery, this is what I mean. The money for this film arrived quickly, and what I still to this day struggle to understand is, why? How did my words work as a trigger switch? Why can’t I do this for my rent, car note, vacations, or my next film, on demand? Damn… Well, for what it’s worth, I will share with you those words that worked.

I said:

“Oh, Heavenly Father, it’s because of you that this dream formed from thoughts YOU put in my head. It is because of YOU that the team is together, and the project is THIS close to happening. The dominos are falling into place. The pigeons are back, and if it is YOUR WILL to see this film come to fruition, then I know that the message is yours, and has purpose and that I have been called upon to teach your words. Oh, Heavenly Father, please make the money find me fast.”

Within one week, a lump sum for the budget was in my Production company account.

The legendary Robi Reed, and her Brother Doran were unavailable for casting, and producing in such a rush time frame. I was introduced to another Casting Director that I grew fond of. Stephen “Pit Bull” Snyder. He delivered quality actors for the audition, that’s how Nick Endreas landed the role of the Rookie Debt Collector. Nick was actually, the reader that day. The apprentice. Somehow, he walked away with the role.

A college friend named Drew Greer was working with Nike at the time and arranged some sci-fi-looking sneakers for Leonard.

The project was in need of a Producer. Someone willing to bleed heavy sweat equity. Through a friend of a friend, I link up with an up-and-coming Producer from down South. His enthusiasm was impressive. He was fresh off a film shot in Vegas, where he was the Line Producer. He hires his friends; Sound. Production designer. Special EFX. Cinematographer. Full post-house production film processing. His Cinematographer Keith Duggan had his own gear. Keith was mad cool.

The Producer had a private meeting where he allocated the budget, telling his comrades: “Get what you feel is right, and keep the change.”

Here’s where the problems started. These people were already paid a fee, so keeping the change only cheated the effort. News of this secret meeting came about accidentally over drinks way after the film was completed.

My blood boiled.

Special Efx is arguably the most important element in a sci-fi film and should be splurged on at all costs. Too bad, we didn’t see eye to eye on that. I take all the blame for not sniffing every dollar.

The crew gets to the location. DTLA. A rusty industrial lot. There was an office inside where a Location Manager rented out the space. He looked like one of the guys who didn’t make it for Kool and the Gang’s backup dancers. He had a curl, and square lenzes. He took the cash payment. We agreed upon a weekend to shoot.

Meticulous rehearsals with Carl Lewis, Nick Endres, Jay Wisell, Rani Free, Giselle Toengi, David Schroeder, Dihanna Baxter, and Jodi Redmond went great. The Wardrobe by Marni Hyde was great. Johnny Feilds agreed to do the catering. Everyone was getting along. Alfonso Zaqueria created the gun. If you can ever hire this guy, you will be so happy.

With everything set to go. We get to the industrial lot with our gear and start unloading. This whole thing smelled right. We’re 30 minutes from the first shot when an assistant from another film team comes to tell us that we can’t shoot here. This was odd because we thought we were the only ones here today. It must have been an error. How could the Location Manager with the dirty gazaelle lenses double-book? I put everything on hold and go to speak with Square Frames. Check out what this sorry-ass dirty drip curl dude tells me:

“Tom Cruise is shooting a promo for Mission Impossible today.”

“What’s that got to do with me?”

“You’ll have to schedule another day.”

“We’ll wait.”

“I don’t think you understand. I want you out of here, pack your stuff and be gone before his first shot.”

“Okay, give me back my money.”

“I’m afraid I can’t do that.”

“I’m not leaving without a film, or my money, dog.”

“Don’t make me call the LAPD to come down here and womp on your ass.”

Womp?

LAPD was nobody you want mad at you, so I just stood silent. That’s when punk ass reached over picking up the phone like he was really about to have me forcefully removed. The calm way I shook my head promised regret. I couldn’t wait to show the Cops my receipt with his signature.

They put him on hold. I walked out of his office and right over to speak to Tom Cruise. The thing about Tom Cruise is… that guys on his level have layers of foliage. One thing you certainly cannot do is walk up on Tom Cruise. A protection service politely stopped me. Allowing me to explain. One of Tom Cruise’s Personal Assistants heard the ruckus and came over. She could have easily had those guys throw me out. Instead, she asked what the short film was about. She was cool. She laughed at the odds. Odds of him wanting to jump in.

Wait, you mean… what????!

She asked me to wait and went around a corner. I hit the squelch button on my walkie, telling my crew to go smoke.

The spare-no-expense set for the Tom Cruise commercial looked like a ten-million-dollar day. That scuzzy lenz asshole of a Location Manager wasn’t slick. I wondered how much he stuffed in his pocket.

Tom Cruise’s Assistant returned, nodding her head like she tried, but no cigar. I believed her, and immediately appealed to her artistic sensibilities. We came up with a compromise:

“How about you tell us when you’re shooting, we’ll pause, then shoot quick between your set-ups?”

The thing that bothered me was that I knew somehow that idiot in the office was going to throw a wrench when he could. Something else that I wasn’t cool with was that I had to “ask” her if we could shoot. I get it, that Tom Cruise was here, and it’s not that I was thinking I could play a game of chicken with the Gorilla in the room, but come on, a guy who worked so hard from the bottom should be happy to see the little guy coming up on a shoestring. We were badly under budget and needed every crumb of production value to make this thing sing.

Time was ticking while the team waited for her to decide on my offer. The real pressure was that we had to get this film done in time to deliver to the Studio before they hired someone else to direct Drumline 2.

The intention and purpose woven into the writing of Drumline 2 are both positive and inspirational. Visioned to be encouraging for young people to find pleasure in picking a discipline. Finding new ways to explore treating the opposite sex with respect. Listening to the gems from their elders. The studio picks who they pick for a reason. Sometimes, you don’t know what you did, all you can do is go with it and ride the gushing wild white water raft route of gratitude. Turns out, Tom Cruise’s Assistant was okay with the plan, and our day began.

The new drama was what shots needed to be cut to make our day. A new shot list had to be crafted. With all this rented gear, we didn’t have the money to shoot another day. Time was ticking. Racing to get the day shots done before we lost the sun.

I figured if we had the fastest man on the planet, it was only right that he run. Leonard Roberts was the debtor, with a warrant. Carl Lewis and his protege Nick Endreas were chasing Leonard down an alley, and Leonard rolled his ankle. Luckily, one of my closest and longest friends in the world was there helping out on set.  Norris Preston-Rakin. Norris was the same height, similar enough skin color, and I told the DP to film the scene from behind him running from Carl and Nick.

It worked.

While editing the film, one of our Producers was really feeling the way it was coming together and asked for an ownership stake. Here’s how that went:

“Own? You want to own what? Uh, did you write it?”

“Come on, you know I didn’t”

“Did you fund it?”

“You know I didn’t.”

“So, we can agree that since it’s not from your brain or bank account, you didn’t attach the lead actor, and the intellectual property belongs to me, right? I paid you to do a specific job and yes, you did work hard, yes you did pick up the tab for a few lunches, and buy drinks from time to time, and don’t think I don’t appreciate you arranging the liquor sponsor for the wrap party, but that’s where it stops. You must think I’m stupid. I guess what they say is true when they say:  ‘this isn’t show friends, it’s show business.’

With the film completed, there was one local festival we got it into, to do a heat check. The Hollywood Black Film Festival, hosted by the wonderfully talented and beautiful Tanya Kersey (R.I.P).

Questions on stage during the Q&A uncovered some cool stories. Like through an ex-girlfriend’s brother’s connection, Toby MaGuire actually considered playing the rookie Cop. I never really knew if Toby ever knew about the script, but we ended up being more than happy with getting Nick Endres instead. I made a joke of warning aspiring filmmakers about hiring producers who funnel your cash. With the win, confidence was restored. It was time to bring this baby to the Studio Boss!

My team screened the film and our Agent didn’t show. Neither did our Studio Exec Bosses. I had the film couriered and called three days later.

Here’s how that call went:

“Nice work, we’ll be in touch.”

CLICK!

Again with the “Don’t call us, we’ll call you.”

We hosted a screening at a fancy place in Beverly Hills, invited every single person we knew. We had free liquor. What was leftover mysteriously disappeared when the lights turned on.

Aside from winning “Best Short” at the Hollywood Black Film Festival, F-U, PAY ME! Made its festival run with an invitation to exhibit at the Seattle Science Fiction Short Film Festival, and the Texas Black Film Festival.

ARCHITECTS OF CRIME

Science fiction films do the most to me when they theory conspiracies; challenge social issues, and politicize global prisons. In freedom-of-thought films, such as “Soylent Green”, “Fast Food Nation”, “Super Size Me”, or the one some of you know we’re living in right now – the topic of mind control has always been fascinating.

Mind control was heavy on the brain one night, and both versions of “The Manchurian Candidate” had to be studied in true binge fashion. This was during the time that I was homeless, living out of my car, in LA. Yeah, it happens. A time of constant panic-attack paranoia, sofa surfing from one psycho to another. Bartering with scripts, using temp jobs, and the promise of film deal outcomes as currency for short-stay rentals. One night in particular, I was hanging out having dinner with an industry acquaintance. Not a friend. Not a peer. A Liberace guy with Slick Rick jewelry who had recently lost the use of his legs in a freak accident. He was a friend of a friend, I thought his story was insane, he liked the attention, so here we were. A court settlement of epic proportion turned him into a mink and diamond-wearing, five-car-owning, bitter ATM. A target with trust issues. Forever dodging fair weather family, purposed paramours, and the shameless stampedes of drooling industry vultures. He had a tight circle of friends.

In the meantime, I assumed that I had passed whatever hood IQ quiz Liberace put people through. He really got off questioning my Blackness. Asking about my diet, types of women I dated, the music I listened to, places I’d go, or the kind of car I’d buy if I had a million dollars. So, here I am. Sitting there feet up sipping pomegranate juice on a leather ottoman in his Wilshire corridor high-rise, Beverly Hills condo, studying this dude.

Liberace dressed like a pimp. Sky blue. Mustard. Lime green. Fuschia. Head to toe. Mongo Slade.

His pad is impeccably clean. Not a crumb on the floor. Stainless steel kitchen stocked for a family reunion. Liquor and beer. He never touched alcohol, and said:  “Poison was for guests”.  He told me to help myself. I think he’s testing me, that’s why I cracked open the pomegranate juice, walking around finger-appraising the lowbrow velvet art hung unevenly on the walls. Absorbing his painful ready-routine. Empathy seeping from my pours as he maneuvers that motorized wheelchair. He dropped his toothbrush on the floor. My cringe-empathy wanted to help, but he was fiercely independent. I told him the truth about me living in my car showering at LA Fitness, and existing on Red Bull and Snickers for months.

I showed him my short film. He wanted to know what I was working on now. I told him I was writing a new script most nights blasted on coffee at a cyber cafe. He dug my style and offered to let me stay in his guest room. We’d seen each other before and knew fractions of each other’s story. He’d seen me styling in my Lexus living on Otsego in NoHo before my recent bad luck.  I knew I wasn’t a stranger. A stranger would get no love asking for the kind of favor I was waiting for the right moment to ask. What got me in his condo was that I had just landed a full-time Marketing 9-5 in Westwood a few blocks away. Liberace knew very well about the potholes littering LA filmmaker’s lawns and believed in my tenacity. He was more than glad to help me transition back to my feet. The job didn’t start for another three days. The deal was that I stay for two paychecks, and move out on that fourth Friday. All I had to do was respect his dwelling.

Liberace didn’t prefer the company of filmmakers. He said they talked too much about obscenely obscure things that he couldn’t wrap his head around. The only people he despised more were actors. Liberace said that actors talked about themselves. He loved music biz people.

Liberace fancied himself as a songwriter and kept asking me if I could introduce him to people in the music biz. I said I knew a few cool cats. He fessed up, saying he wanted to get a song on the air. One that he was going to get the publishing credit for writing. If you let him tell it, he was the next big thing. I asked him to let me hear something, he said he had notebooks of songs written but needed production and studio vocalists to bring it all to life.

I admitted that I was not skilled enough in that world to read a song and sniff a hit. However, I knew a guy who knew a guy, who had a studio in the Valley. Turns out, timing was good as he was working with two big groups with platinum plaques from the 90’s, that were both working on comeback projects. The deal was that if he helped me with my film investment, I’d get him in good with my guy. Liberace was in luck, because both groups were looking for writers, and had a fancy studio. I genuinely wanted him to get a gold record to replace these horrible paintings hanging all over the place. I also wanted a piece of the action. It wasn’t fair of me to ask to own anything, but I did want to work out my involvement in whatever capacity everyone was cool with. Maybe directing the first label-financed music video? Maybe a finder’s fee? Whatever.

Night after night, I couldn’t stop seeing the vivid replay in my head of his accident. He was out walking his dog one morning, and the oblong tilt of a palm tree made no sound of stretching, popping, or tearing out of the tree lawn dirt. Falling silently like a guillotine shattering his spinal cord. Was he ever going to walk again? Not for me to say. Only God knows. I thought maybe my optimist’s energy was what kept me around.

When I lived in Brooklyn, I met a guy named Danny Reyes by the Castle-Hill stop, up in the Bronx. Danny told me at a dinner meeting how he was a promising high school basketball player, driving to a game with his teammates. They were mistaken for someone else by the Police, pulled over, and shot. Danny spent years in a wheelchair. The meeting we were having that day was because mutual friends put us together. After all, he was seeking the right person to write and direct his life story. As much as I wanted to help that project come to fruition, I was of no help to Danny, because I was in New York seeking funding for several of my projects. Danny and I bonded. The personal side of his story was going to affect a lot of people in such a positive way. How he never gave up. His faith in God, and how he promised that if he ever got out of that chair, he’d be a role model.

I never talked to Danny again. However, years later, I saw him on social media, walking, playing basketball, and swimming in a public pool. My eyes fogged. Tears running down my face. God touched Danny with a full recovery. Seeing Danny come back from that, was why I had the highest of hopes for my gracious Beverly Hills host.

The meeting with the music people was on the calendar. I got Liberace interested in this mind-control idea. We talked for several nights about how deadly a mind control machine could be in today’s political climate. A screenplay about cybergenic legs for a famous retired athlete was born. Then, it was rewritten into a story about a backroom deal with city council corruption, involving eminent domain. Displacing a long-standing LA Latino community.

The story is about a disbarred Neurologist accused of illegal human experimenting. The Doctor snuck back into the country and was working as an orderly at a Los Angeles hospital. Stealing parts to rebuild his mysterious machine. A device used on Prostitutes to erase horrific traumas. Treating storage areas in the brain to restore their identities. It worked. The lives of his test subjects were forever saved, but before he could conduct sanctioned testing, and get approvals to get his license back, he was caught by a Detective and extorted into helping her with the eminent domain mystery. She needed him to reverse the machine’s primary function so that she could find lost memories. Memories are purposely erased by another diabolical machine. The Doc swears that what the Detective wants is simply too dangerous.

That’s when the Detective threatens to turn him in. He agrees and together, they uncover a monumental political coup that is about to go down. They have just enough time to go up against some very powerful people who are controlling the minds of local Latino politicians.

Okay, so my gracious Beverly Hills Host saw crumbs of merit in this film idea and agreed to help kick-start the financing.

That’s all I needed to hear, as I sat down at my desk. The pages seemed to write themselves, coming together quickly. As soon as the outline was done, I presented him with an Executive Producer’s contract and asked him for that seed money. That was when he kicked me out of his house.

Throwing my belongings into the hallway.

Screaming at me so the neighbors knew my business. I don’t know how he got so angry, and resentful. Accusing me of being a “Typical opportunist”.  I thought I was a mench giving him the paperwork upfront. He had NO IDEA how many people don’t exercise that kind of decorum. People in film and music will get your money, spend it, and then discuss terms. He was in for a rude awakening when he moved on to do deals with the people out there waiting for a sucker. Liberace wasn’t after money or esoteric film concepts, he was after paths to roads leading to writing music so he could be the ultimate groupie.

I slept in my car that night with about two hours of charge on my laptop. Excited. I was writing a new script.

The Beverly Hills Marketing job was a bust-out, and I was back to living in my car.

It figures.

It happens.

I started working as a Bouncer at a popular nightclub in Hollywood. The pay was horrible, and I got into fights almost every other weekend. Coming home scuffed up. The other Bouncers were serious fighters who enjoyed creating opportunities to break faces. They enjoyed the freedom of wearing brass knuckles on the job.

I kept them entertained with stories on the smoker’s back patio.

The show must go on. I used a lot of visualization techniques. Purposed to finding financing for this film. Little by little, tiny things started to fall into place. Dogs had to be walked in the slippery, shit-stained Hollywood dungeons. Being a Bouncer in one of LA’s hottest dives came with perks. I felt a special privilege to know Gangsters of all varieties. Women and men. Latino. Armenian. Asian. Albanian. Black. White. Russian. Jewish. Persian. Clubs got shot up now and then. Rumor had it that the guy whom I replaced got shot. Thumb-sized holes in the door substantiated stories.

We had this locked door policy for our after-hour raves. Whatever kind of pills you needed were sold inside by the guys with the glow sticks. If you arrived after the cut-off, I was told that you were Law Enforcement, because everybody knew the cutt off.

There were no fights on the thumpy dance tune nights. I knew all the promoters. There was this guy from Simi who had a big birthday party at the club. Best buds with the Owner, the Promoter ran some fancy modeling agency. His party had a strict rule for the theme. Vampire lingerie attire only. Hurses pulled up. Ambulances. I was waiting for a horse and buggy, but getting a horse in LA to wait outside was not worth the trouble. Everyone loves the door guy, stuffing my pockets as they passed cakes and presents. Flirting with a few Vampire women, I didn’t mean it when I said “Save me a slice.”

Pretty people. The place was packed. One hour later, one of the frisky Vampires came to see me with a paper plate and a huge hunk of cake. She kissed me on the cheek and ran back into the party before I could respond.

I was in love, completely unaware the cake was cooked in cannabis butter…

I ate the whole thing.

About an hour later… I suspected something… when it was too late. The hit was slow and gradual. I felt it touching my toes, crawling up my ankles. Like being dipped into warm honey soup. Good Lord! I had to get outta here.

What if a fight broke out?

What if the Owner showed up?

Would he know? Of course, he’d know.

What if the Police came? What if?

What if? Paranoia was all over me like a rash.

I never drank on the job. The Owner was sure to show up for his buddy’s party. Luckily, he was in Europe, and this was a chill crowd. It could have gone left. Like the time the Armenians fought the Mexicans over the good corner in the smoker’s patio. The heat got flashed, but luckily, it was all for show. I tasted a few knuckles and felt a few kicks trying to get in the middle of that dust-up. The fact that I took care of these guys every time is the only reason things didn’t pop off. I didn’t separate them that night, I knew they were bored from running out of things to talk about, so I challenged them to a drinking game. Sort of like charades meets trivial pursuit. The result? The Armenian-Mexican love moment sprouted seeds and grew from there. They protected me.

Coming home dripping in blood was a thing I never wanted to get used to. The pay was total shite, but I had to bring home something until I found a better gig. Trust me, every time I talked to someone, I was listening for a chance to ask for a job. Every door that opened was illegal. I respectfully declined.

One night, a diamond tooth, yoga bracelet, Rock Face Gangsta who copped at the club noticed me. By his grin, I could tell he’d taken a shine to me. “Whaddup Folks?” Is how he greeted me. If you smelled dangerous, like you might shoot up the club, I bought you a drink and often got you into the VIP back patio where the weed smoke was partition thick. The term Folks sounded like Chicago Gangbanger lingo, but this guy was from somewhere certainly South of Pico.

I talked shit about stuff on the news, new music, and mostly the scripts that I was working on. Rock Face the Gangsta would come in every few weeks, and each time he’d know exactly where I left off. I was pitching him my entire script catalog, beat by beat. One night, he asked me what my story was. Not the stuff I write, but me. “Who in the hell are ya?” I spit a little game, and told him about the time I was in New Zealand working with the Boo Yaa Tribe, my adventures living in Brooklyn, Cleveland, Honolulu, and Amsterdam, and my filmmaker stumbles in LA. Rock Face the Gangsta took my number, Chicken Hawk sneering when he said he’d see what he could do. I didn’t know what that even meant, but Bouncers know everyone on the scene, so I went with it.

Several months later, I’m suited up – set up working as the number two Legal Recruiter at a DTLA firm. Trying my best to be the top dog. Coming in an hour early, flirting with the Law Firm partners, buying coffee for everyone, staying an hour late, juggling an aggravatingly berzerk, multi-line desk when a voice on the call said: “Whaddup, Folks?”

Rock Face the G.

How he got my work number said a lot about the quality of his Gangsta. He said he had a guy he wanted me to meet. Now.

“Now?”

When we met, I was poor, hungry, desperate, and oozing with excessive bad life choices. My life was together now, I was wearing suits to work. I was a totally transformed version of the Hollywood Bouncer. These days, I had it good, making more money than I had ever seen in a 9-5 situation. Successfully stepping from starving artist sofa surfing to six figs in tailored suits and Ferragamo loafers was indeed,  a personal victory. I was getting fades every week and manicures and facials from Shelly Burbo’s Sherman Oaks Skinology and in love with everything about life at this juncture. The Boss Recruiter, oh… she was a hater, and if she thought you were doing ANYTHING that was not focused on her making HER money… there was going to be problems. She was one of those women with purchased ass, boobs, and abs, who used those weapons to make money, and she was loaded. She sexually extorted me. That’s a story for later. Remind me.

How was I going to get out of here today? Two weeks before today, I lied to her, saying that I had a dentist appointment. I had to make something else up this time.

Rock Face the G wanted me to drop everything in the middle of the day and come up to West Hollywood for a coffee shop meeting. I tried to explain that I couldn’t just walk out of work. Rocky says: “Folks, I don’t think you’re hearing me.” The thing was, he had no idea how many times I’d heard that one. How many times I’d lost my job because of my hungry hypnosis for having Hollywood. It was Friday at three thirty-six. My Boss was out as usual with her girlfriends having drinks. She’d call the office, giggling, drunk requesting progress reports, and have one of us running errands, threatening us saying what would happen if she got back to the office before us. We knew she wasn’t coming back. However, I didn’t want to risk today being the one day that she did stumble back into the office.

I didn’t trust Rock enough to get me a job making this kind of money, plus I kinda liked wearing cufflinks. I didn’t even know if Rock was a real OG, but in LA – that’s one title street dudes mos def don’t throw around.

I went to the meeting.

MELROSE AVE. COFFEE SHOP

I walked in hit hard by the gingerbread. The scent was intoxicating as the Hostess led me to the patio where I saw Rock Face sitting with a sun-tanned early 60’s San Diego surfer. Rocky’s guest looked so much like Matthew McConaughey. I had to stare at the wrinkles in his face, and his blue eyes closely to make sure this wasn’t the luckiest day in my filmmaker dreams. It wasn’t Matthew McConaughey. San Diego sat Native American Indigenous folded knees on the patio, wearing a Gucci fanny pack. A diamond face crusted Patek. Thin gold chains, bracelets, Hugh Heff open buttons on his shirt showing off more chest hair than men outside of Milan.

Despite revealing the private and TMI details of his toxic marriage to a complete stranger, he was a laid-back, long-winded, blonde beach boy with hang-eleven surfer slang. He had his yacht built in Amsterdam, and he sailed it home to Southern California. This would have impressed me if I had been interested in seeing his yacht.

Rock Face kept looking at me like “Bro, don’t you dare mess this one up.” I had no idea what was happening. I fired off a text to a coworker to find out the status of the Boss. I was more than ready to race back downtown.

The talk was so surface level, that I was about to thank them for their time and leave. However, the thing that drew my eye was that San Diego was wearing glazed-green gator skin driving mocs. He slurped on a lunchtime Mojito, gasping in exposed dental nerve pain after every hard swallow. San Diego sensed that I was disinterested in his show-offery, and things immediately switched to biz. He had his own story that needed to be told, and he was looking for a writer for an epic television show. He wanted the story to be seen all over the world, at the same time, on every channel. I shot a private glance to the G: “Where did you find this guy?”

San Diego kept talking. Pointing to the diamond sparkles in his one-of-a-kind custom ivory-tusk paint job Mercedes convertible taking up two spots in the lot. The meeting was over as far as I was concerned. He held up his mojito glass, summoning one for me. I declined. Rock Face was nothing more than the kind of clown I needed to stop entertaining in my life. This was the kind of thing my Brother hated me for. If I lost my job again, he was going to disown me. This starving artist jumping from job to job thing had taken a terrible toll on our relationship. It was 4:45 Friday afternoon. No way the Boss was going to show up now.

I decided to use the ‘price myself out’ method so I could get out of there. What I was about to say was going to scratch the record, cut the lights on, and end the party. Sometimes you have to burn bridges so the crazy don’t follow you. Of respect for the G, I said: “Sounds like a winner. Tell ya what – I’ll do an outline for ten thousand, cash, and then upon approval – I’ll do the script for an additional seventy.”

I was waiting to see how this guy who wasn’t used to hearing no, was going to respond. To my surprise, San Diego in the Gator mocs didn’t flinch, he spun his Gucci fanny pack around, almost mockingly – throwing a wrapped rack of Benjamins into my lap. Ten thousand bucks:

“Meet me at my office at nine tomorrow with the outline.”

I played it cool, knowing Rock the G was going to want a cut so big, it may slash the seats of this cosmic ride, affecting my desire to move forward. I stood, shook hands with both, and bounced out the back door.

Rock called me thirty minutes later and said:

“Don’t go into that meeting tomorrow without seeing me at the coffee shop on the corner. I’ll be there at 8:30.”

Rock said he wanted half.

HALF?! BRUH!!!!!!!?

I responded with a tilted head condescending whisper: “You DO know that Agents, Managers, and Attorneys get ten to fifteen respectively, and if this turns into something, those kinds of collaborators need to be added to the team. So, giving you fifty percent effectively leaves me with a pack of wet matches.”

I wanted him to get mad and hang up. I don’t know what kinda gangsters you know, but rarely do they negotiate the win-win. However, Rock Face was really cool and hit me with a calm crooner’s voice when he said:

“Whatever is fair, Bro. Make me one promise?”

“What’s that?”

“Don’t ask him to throw in a pair of those moccasins.”

Damn it! How did he know I was going to say that? Betcha he was getting a pair for himself. Asshole.

The first thing I do is bring my Brother in. I walk into the house with a wad of cash. Dropping something heavy in his lap. Without meeting these two Gents, or hearing a word of the plan, my Brother starts fuming. Stomping around the room gathering the money that he just threw up into the air. Anger warping his smirking lips, all I saw was his familiar “here we go again” crumped grill.

I said: “If you don’t want to do it, just take that cash, and keep working on our TV specs so we can land on a dope show one day.”

He softened his mind when I told him about the strategy that I had for Surfer’s story. It was going to be an Argentine “Great Gatsby” meets “The Man In The Iron Mask”. That night, after watching those films, we churned out an outline that we both loved. The next day, I took him to meet Rock Face at the Java spot. Passing Rock two thousand dollars, and a folder.

“What’s this?”

“The outline, the thing he wants to see so he knows I’m worth what he’s going to pay for the script, don’t you want to read it?”

Rock the G smiled. Stuffing the loot in his pocket. Giving me a fist bump, he threw up the deuces spun around, and rolled out.

The San Diego surfer greeted my Brother and me on time, in a virtual office lobby with bear claws and steaming mint tea. This time, he had on burgundy moccasins. He sat us down on the sofa to enjoy the munch, while his eyes scanned the document. He took his time. Any writer will tell you how much they love that. Soon, his eyes popped up and his smile said we were about to do business together. My Brother and I set out to write a TV pilot called “The Grand Earl of Denton”. The real-life revenge story of a British society scoundrel. I paid close attention to the many story sessions that detailed the posh life. I thought it was pretty interesting how he got screwed out of his inheritance. The story was about to be the scathing fictional payback that he never got. This was going to be fun.

Weekly cash disbursements were small, but they kept coming.

Three months into the writing process, San Diego’s world implodes when he gets surprise-subpoenaed.

A set of divorce papers.

We felt bad for him and took a trip down to spend the day in San Diego. Surfer was living in a gated community of mountain-view mansions. His golden retriever loved me. The wine cellar was bigger than our apartment. His home theatre had THX, and his garage looked like an exotic car showroom stuffed with a Maserati Gran Tourismo, a Ferrari 458 Pista spyder, and a Bently Bentayga all freshly waxed.

His wife washed him with bleach. He cracked open the good whiskey and said: “Fellas if you ever get married for looks, the hours are long.”

He was in pain. There was nothing we could do. We had work to do. He was sad and didn’t even pack for a three-day trip to Tijuana to deal with his depression. He was a completely new man the next time we saw him.

A month later, the project was finished, he asked: “Well, now what? Let’s get this puppy on the air. Get me a TV deal.”

I broke it to him easily:

“We’re indie film guys, with a very short list of actionable television contacts, and no A-list cast attachments. Those people would probably be open to talking to you if you had a name. Otherwise, you need corporate sponsors, a track record in TV, and a lot of muscle.”

He asked: “Well Hell, how do you get a name?”

Truth was, I didn’t have an agent at the moment, and my attorney probably couldn’t get a real pitch set up. I didn’t want to let him down, so I hurled a hail Mary. Suggesting, perhaps an easier route to arriving at the answer:

”By making a profit from a groundbreaking indie film, you can leverage the right doors to get those TV meetings.”

“What do you have in mind?”

“A Sci-fi story about mind control.”

Surfer loved it. I pointed out that with a special effects budget, things are going to cost a little. San Diego had one of those “money is no problem” laughs. I placed a call to a Producer friend – who was, at the time, one of, if not the… biggest female indie producers in the game. With her Rolodex, she had better than decent odds of attracting bankable talent that could get us a respectable distribution deal. The portal corridor kind of where you actually make good money. After pitching the mind control story to my Producer friend, she joined the team. We were so grateful to get her, and our hot-shot (notorious graffiti hooligan) British import DP. Now that the boat was built, fortified, and set to sail, a debut feature film smelled more real than any of the many failed conquests littering the last two decades.

The thing we didn’t see coming was that the Divorce Attorneys put a freeze on “frivolous funds”. Both Councils weren’t in favor of him giving two Black guys that he’d just met – a sum of many millions of dollars for a risky film venture. Even though, our strategy was to not accept the money until we had a distribution deal in place.

The sting of this suddenly surreal “grand opening — grand closing” moment was one we’d felt a dozen times before. He apologized and that was it. Finito. Done. Dunzo. Kaput.  I watched him sell his mansion and went with him looking at properties in Malibu.

I’d put too much risk into this performance. I couldn’t face my Brother with no money. We couldn’t do anything with the “Grand Earl of Denton” Pilot script, because it was his life story. I slept over at my friend Sylvia’s pad for the next two nights, deciding how to tell my Brother that the film was dead.

I went to see San Diego one last time in his new Malibu pad and managed to convince him to give us ten thousand dollars to create a proof-of-concept film, to attract new investors. I promised him that he was still going to be on the team, but not as the lead investor. He agreed and pulled the cash out of a black Gucci backpack tucked in the lower drawer of his liquor cabinet. He reminded me of Pablo Escobar the way he could find two thousand bucks wrapped in a sock tucked in the back of a kitchen junk drawer.

Even with the ten racks, my Bro was vexed, screaming spitting sardonic fumes at me: “Now we’re working for free! With $10K for a sci-fi film, you can’t pay yourself shit! That money has to go on the screen!” One thing about my Brother, he is a purist to a fault. The average asshole in Hollywood would put as much of that money in their pocket for bills, pizza, and beer, but not my Brother. He loved the art the craft of filming too much to put a penny in his pocket. That money had to go on the screen. I love him for that. After reluctantly tolerating the top of his lungs scream-fest, I eventually convinced my Brother to double down and take the risk. His vitriolic rage for me grew in grudges from grumbles to growls. He didn’t have to work on the film… but he decided to do it with me.

We were honest with each other and our team in the meeting that night communicating the very limited resources at our disposal. The team agreed to stick around. We owed each of them a debt of gratitude for that.

Making a film is like sailing to an island with a chewed-up treasure map and flimsy spoons for the dig. You crew up and bargain for supplies, food, and special filmmaker toys.  The most ironic thing about my indie filmmaking experience is that you have to listen for creaks in the floorboards from mutiny-plotting pirates (on your same team) who are drilling holes in the boat knowing we can all drown, but they are eager to toss you off to the sharks.

There are many ways to get an education in the film business. Not everyone comes up in the game the same way. For example, some people appear trustworthy and often become confidence scammers. People of imposing size often become bullies, simply because they learn their currency and trade for it. However, in the film business, most Producers work their way up from being Production Assistants and learn everything by way of climbing a ladder. They see the hierarchy, they get the coffee, take out the trash, park the cars, walk the dogs, and run the errands. All the while, they are seeing that the special someone at the top who they are trying to impress… always seems to treat the minions like annoying smelly garbage.

Some anxiously wait for their turn to torture, while others on the rise swear to never ever be like that. Then, the day comes when they find themselves running the show, and get to be who they’ve always wanted to be. The evil wielder of leverage. This is one way of doing business. Another way may be that a writer wants to be a director, finds the money to execute this vision, and hires people to help achieve this vision. Problems arise when the Producer that the Writer hires, thinks they can take over the creative decisions on a script they did not write or finance. This could be an issue for you. Especially if this person tries to fire valuable team players behind your back, or create crew dissension to turn on you if ordered.

This all comes from the highest levels of Producer insecurity.

Your production may be in deep water if your Producer salaciously schemes on the Actors during their audition. You may be sinking and not know it if your Producer and DP go outside for a fistfight in the middle of production. Water may be getting in your boat if the Producer sets you up to shoot in a warehouse where a rave is taking place next door, during your shoot. Sharks are circling your boat if your Producer plays with the prop guns on a street corner after hours in Downtown LA.

Mermaids just want to have fun, and will certainly lure your focus if you lack discipline.

The moment the funds landed in my production account, rusty blades came out. Torches ignited. A mutiny broke out on the deck of what appeared to be a smooth sailing ship… steering into a storm.

The real cinema was hiding this unbearable in-fighting from the public eye, and the Investor. The DP and three Producers were at war with each other. Four fights. Art. Commerce. Control and credit. The only victory was finishing the film. Our goal was to make San Diego look good for trusting us. We knew his multi-million dollar net worth was not harmed by the divorce, only paused during the process. We knew that if we delivered something amazing, we’d get back on track, and finish this feature film with him.

However, during the editing phases, unbeknownst to any of us, San Diego pulled out all interest when a more attractive offer presented itself. The confusion forced us all into survival mode. Friendships were tested. Fingers pointed. My only explanation was that you are not you when you’re fighting to breathe.

Film Biz Rule #317, Never let your investor hop around the Hollywood party scene, bragging to bloodthirsty strangers about the final steps remaining before investing in your film. In other words, don’t be the stripper parading her lottery-wining boyfriend around singles bars, before the wedding.

As Joe Rogan would say: “And… just… like… that..” it was over. After months of writing, courting, trips back and forth to San Diego, lunches, dinners, promises, and the physical toll of pre-production – the feature film deal was aborted. Snatched by an unworthy slick-belly salamander who shot out from under a rock.

The crew blamed me.

I confronted the Investor at his gated beach residence in Malibu. Congratulating him on his new three-picture deal. Some lucky schmuck who overheard him talking loud on his phone while shitting in the men’s room at a club, had fallen into miracle fortune.

Oh well, I couldn’t hate.

That’s Hollywood. Never personal. Always business.

I was in the hole seven grand with another investor who helped us with finishing funds for the edit. My heart was broken.

For years, I beat my head against the wall, pouring everything I had into every line on every page. Each script took months to execute, and I truly believed that our entire catalog could compete in the marketplace, and now… I get this?

The filmmakers I most admired nearly killed themselves to get into position to finish their films, and they made timeless art. Guys like Francis. Lars. Brian. Steven.

With much more mountain to climb, my fake smile did its thing that night, as I raised my glass to toast. San Diego was going to share the screen with stars from the 80’s. The thing we missed in our many drinking nights, was that for over thirty years, San Diego was an actor. Despite his gallant attempts, the stars hadn’t fallen into place the way he wanted yet.

The guy who stole San Diego from us was about to get three more films out of him. I respected the genius chess move. All he did was listen. He listened. Finding out what the Investor’s needs were. While I considered myself a purist, overly concerned with creating something critic-proof to launch an auteur’s career, I missed the crucial key. I assumed the Investor wanted a return, and in our case something to launch his TV pilot. The unsaid is a hard thing to hear.

An example of how cold Hollywood can be, was when San Diego invited us to the screening of the first of his new director’s three feature films. They paid a lot to rent out Raleigh studios, serving mini-pizzas, wine, and stuffed strawberries. When the film started, it was apparent that the strategy was “Start-up Distribution companies need films, so give them something, and don’t sweat it.” San Diego was right, but this hurt me because I know firsthand how fickle the Buyers are at Cannes, and at the AFM in Santa Monica. If I made cars, I’d aspire to make Porsche engines. The greatest machines rolling the road.

My Brother didn’t want to attend the screening, but I made him go. He took great pleasure in the way he made a showing of getting up in the first two minutes. Walking out. Stepping on everyone’s feet. Slamming the door.

My Brother had his told ya so moment. He knew from the day that I walked in with that ten grand that he was going to be right.

Accepting my defeat graciously, I stayed for the entire film. Filling up on red wine in the lobby afterward. Congratulating San Diego for the one line of dialogue he was given.

The lesson that day was that film life is not fair. Some make great fortunes installing go-cart engines in clown cars for the circus, and people love it. Look at you, with your Porsche 911 dreams. I’d be a hater if I said anything about the show they put on.

I did shake hands with them, but my smile was fake while watching the Honcho director drive off in a gleaming drop-top Mercedes with the lead actress’s hair blowing in the wind.

I went home on the bus to reheat leftover mac’n cheese.

The thing that I am most proud of is that every single artist on the crew got to be an artist, and they kicked ass. “Architects of Crime” is still winning short film festivals. The feature script is free of entanglements, and currently seeking equity partners.

The sad part of this story is that my favorite DP Shane Daly committed suicide. Hollywood is a party with limited invitations. We fall for the mirage. The illusion that our dreams lead us here for that party. Some try to sneak in the back door, but you can’t stay if Hollywood doesn’t want you here. I got to know Shane in what appeared to be a much closer bond than any American in LA. We talked about how to do it without the blessing of Hollywood. We loved picking apart the nuances within the politics of boxing, hip hop, graffiti, racism and why America is so uncomfortable with inter-racial dating – while grilling bison sipping Irish whiskey – watching the fascinating skills of unknown filmmaking teams responsible for underground indies. My favorite UK rapper was Roots Manuva, and his favorite American was Nas. We argued over who was more of a Nas fan.

Out of respect for Shane, I will not detail the story of his family. Shane was no saint. A misunderstood artist who lacked the kind of communication skills necessary for synchronous friendships. Shane preferred talking with pictures on screens with cameras and walls with klacka-klacka cans of fat cap paint. His crew in London was a big deal. They dealt with Robo and Banksy. Worlds we know nothing of. Shane and I had some good times, and a few productive dust-ups. He was heavy into Crypto. Guns. The study of Jui-Jitsu, and his two cats.  He had to move to Vegas after his divorce and while there, the dirty claws of depression punctured his jugular. His marriage collapsed for many reasons. All of these were his fault chiefly because he was horrible at sharing his feelings, and that Hollywood was doing him dirty. Not the first man conditioned to bottle emotions. He said he was editing a documentary about his untouchable graffiti crew in London, and that some of them weren’t going to be pleased with it. “Tossers” is what he called him for not supporting his efforts with simple cooperation of interviews when he’d flown into town for the meet. He hinted that they’d threatened him when he screamed: “BULLOCKS! THE SHOW MUST GO ON!”

The documentary was never finished. Maybe it was.

Shane got mixed up in a sexual harassment case in a film in LA where he says that he was the victim. From the version he shared with me, I said: “The judge will never believe you, man. You’re too tall and loud and argumentative and come in the room with a bully’s menacing energy.”   Shane was 6’4, White, bald with a tattoo on his neck. I told him not to get that ink, because of the negative assumptions he’d invite. Shane had no idea that the way he walked around carrying on resembled the aggressive stance of a recently released prison inmate. I told him that people here seek to put you in a box based on appearance, best to move confusing and pick your moments to play up that posh British accent that he could do. Americans love and respect that accent.

Shane said more than once that if his Crypto bag of over $200K got erased, he would kill himself. I thought he was joking. That was his running joke. Killing himself. I never paid it any mind. Shane was up for a few features each paying well over six figures. He was reading the scripts and hating all of them. He was an artist who really wanted his work to affect the world. To enhance movie-making experiences. That is why he was writing his own short film script to direct. The one about his childhood and is Mom who did the best she could with the Dad he never knew. Writing ain’t easy… he was stuck hating his current draft. I offered to assist. He said he wanted to take another pass before sharing.

I don’t think the virtuoso cinematographer liked Vegas. He said he wanted to move to Texas and get a Tesla SUV and have a compound for abandoned cats so he could love them proper.

Like anyone who tries to earn a living in Hollywood, there comes the crush. The slap. The silent cry. Shane was harmed by the rejection of the film game. It’s difficult not to take it personally. The sexual harassment lawsuit ended rather badly by him being forced to drop the case, which devastated his confidence in the system. He assured me with great certainty that his name was blackballed.

A man with his cats, Shane was a heavy drinker and a serious weed smoker with pistols, rifles, ammo, vests, infrared goggles, and explosives in his apartment. He prayed that no one would make the mistake of trying to rob him in the middle of the night.  I’d assumed he had the place booby-trapped with cameras and maybe explosives.

Walking toxic.

At least once a week, he’d call me explaining the altercation he barely avoided with someone sitting close to him in the cinema who was having a full-on conversation on their phone, cutting him off in traffic, catching an attitude over the last melon at the market, or the insensitive secretary at his doctor’s office. He never left the house without a blade, three loaded weapons, and a vest. I feared the day anyone actually tried to call him out or pull a gun on him for show.

Shane was also getting quite good at martial arts. A local MMA gym had him fascinated with Jujitsu. He was a lethal cocktail to say the least. However, any decent Sifu would teach his students the kind of respect for humanity to avoid fighting at all costs, so I knew the more he trained the less he was going to hurt someone. He blamed his wife. His Hollywood collaborators. His Mother. I told him he played a part in all of that. He called me a cunt and told me to FUCK OFF!

We blocked each other on the phone and didn’t speak for several days at a time. I did it and he took it personally, as if how dare you reduce this abuse?  I knew he was under a dark cloud and put myself out there just to show him some love when his world lacked any semblance. I walked into winless debates. I said things that I’m sure he screenshotted and sent to some of you to make you hate me, but hey… whatever. I said what I said and I stand on business.

Sometimes you say things you don’t mean to talk someone off the ledge.

I unblocked him about a week later and said whaddup? He never responded.

Weeks turned into months. Then I stopped waiting.

While he was not speaking to me something happened in his world that pushed him over the red line.

BANG! Without warning, the day arrived when Shane put a gun to his head and

BOOM!

POP!

Ending not just a life, but one full of amazing artistic potential.

Shane Daly will always be one of the most brilliant Cinematographers in the film business. He is gone. A flame pinched out before it could blaze its name.

True, Shane rubbed a few people the wrong way, but if you wanted the friendship and knew how to get under that tough skin, he was a real dude. A bad-ass British B-boy artist who felt comfortable with comedy in a room full of Black guys.

CHEERS, MATE…

You will be missed, Bruv.

From LA to NY, Gangsters know Gangsters when they see one. Men and women fluent in a wordless language of signals. Stories of the criminal fringe have always drawn me in. The Costa Nostra of Southern Italy and the South American Cartels will forever be the coolest terrains of terror. That’s exactly why I chose something far off the radar. The shrouded culture of Yakuza. My fictional 6-part series was born from years of fascinating research, and respect.

My pages will share with you the historical dark ceremonies of an honorable bloodline. A lineage often downplayed by the Media. Gokudo 893 is a slow-burn episodic chronicling “the evil necessary”, a sect of society decorated by stories told in ink. Painted in the red smoke of food, fashion, and pageantry dating back to the days of the Shogun. I was amazed to learn of the Black Samurai, YASUKE, and the role he played in history. In every culture, Gangsters have always been known for their storytelling. The Yakuza are no different. Gokudo 893 talks about how Japan took the baton and ran into the beauty of their Hip Hop.

I chose suburban Maryland as one of the settings because it was said to be the most difficult American city to assimilate to.

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Gokudo 893 is a movie for your ears!
Experience the Gokudo 893 Cinematic Radio Play.

Prepare to be mesmerized by the awe-inspiring cinematic radio play, Gokudo 893 narrated by the author William Derrick III himself!

Immerse yourself in a world where gripping storytelling, compelling characters, and captivating soundscapes converge to create an unforgettable audio experience. With seamless narration and an enthralling musical score and psychedelic sound effects, ‘Gokudo 893’ transports listeners into the very heart of the narrative, leaving them spellbound till the very last word.

Now, this remarkable production is available on all major retailers. Tune in and let the magic of ‘Gokudo 893’ unfold before your very ears!

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Gokudo 893 Book Reviews

Damn son, you can write your ass off, and i’m not iust blowing smoke. Very descriptive and original style.

— Dave McCalister

You got skills homeboy … Dope ass sound effects.  Magic made us into Monsters.

— Thomas “Top Gun” Teague

Ok bro.  Love the momentum

— Jerarld Davis

This is wild AF

— Derrick Muhammed

RQQ!

— Tahsheen Porter

Congratulations, I see a show being made based on it ! !

— Kelly Woodson

Just bought my copy – hardcover book * and, not you with the radio announcer/voiceover artist voice!

— Ryan Canty

Sex in a hot air balloon is the best way to get home from traffic

— Dave McCallister

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